i know people

I know why people do bad things
Do you
I do
People think that they have already Done bad
Have they
they must think they have
SEE,
people think they have so
their like whats the point of being GOOD!








IF U KNOW SOMEONE LIKE THIS








YOU SHOULD HELP THEM OUT








PLEASE SEND THIS TO EVERYONE YOU KNOW






YOU MIGHT CHANGE A LIFE
!!!!!!





JUST MABEY

Uhm,
spam?
We don't do things like that on here.
Not that I've seen of.

valarie13 wrote:I know why people do bad things
Do you
I do
People think that they have already Done bad
Have they
they must think they have
SEE,
people think they have so
their like whats the point of being GOOD!








IF U KNOW SOMEONE LIKE THIS








YOU SHOULD HELP THEM OUT








PLEASE SEND THIS TO EVERYONE YOU KNOW






YOU MIGHT CHANGE A LIFE
!!!!!!





JUST MABEY

Please don't use caps in your work. I think this could be written better. Get rid of the caps in this and put some rythm into it. I hope this helps!

-Rick.

ok.....? I- well its ok.

Ack! It's spam!
Some punctuaton would make this poem a lot easier to read (also taking away the caps.)If you put a little rhythm in this (as someone already mentioned), then this could be better.
~MV

Um. No spam. Thanks. *locked*