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ude dude

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Fri Apr 08, 2005 9:34 pm

ude dude says... · Fri Apr 08, 2005 9:34 pm

Hello this is me
I am myself
Nobody else Just myself

There is no one like me
I am my own person
Just another body but special

For I am me
And this is real
And I am my own person

~Ude Dude~

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Lollipop

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Fri Apr 08, 2005 10:37 pm

Lollipop says... · Fri Apr 08, 2005 10:37 pm

Yeah! I like this! Go you and write more!

~Lollipop~

Way hay!!!!

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Shadow Knight

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Fri Apr 08, 2005 10:48 pm

Shadow Knight says... · Fri Apr 08, 2005 10:48 pm

Do I need to start another chant? ok fair enough, WE WANT MORE WE WANT MORE WE WANT MORE!

Cause i'm a one man,
I'm a one man,
I'm a one man,
I'm a one man revolution.

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Harley

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Fri Apr 15, 2005 9:28 pm

Harley says... · Fri Apr 15, 2005 9:28 pm

Umm... it's not terrible, but it's not really one to be proud of. It's clear that it's your first, and with time you will improve.

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emotion_less

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Reviews 333

Fri Apr 15, 2005 9:40 pm

emotion_less says... · Fri Apr 15, 2005 9:40 pm

Your poetry will develop the more you read other peoeple's works. Critique will help you a lot and the more you write, the easier it will come. I suggest reading around for now and observing other poets.

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