Dogs of War - Tomorrow

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If you ask nicely, I'll e-mail you the audio of my song (Except for the drums, sorry. I need to get some drums.)

Verse
Here I stand again
Lost without a friend
And I can hardly see the light

You told me once or twice
Stop playing cards with my heart
Or I will have to leave tonight

Chorus
And I don't even care
Where I'm going tomorrow
Is not that far away

And I don't even know
Where I'm going tomorrow
Brings the light of day

Verse
Here I stand again
Left alone and cold and I
Won't live to see tonight

You told me once or twice
The final straw's the last
And now I'm done and gone again and again and again and again and...

Chorus
And I don't even know
Where I'm going tomorrow
Is not that far away

And I don't even know
Where I'm going tomorrow
Is better than today

Guitar solo... you don't know how sweet this sounds until you've heard it.

Verse without drums or lead guitar. Rythym and vocals only

Chorus
And I don't even care
Where I'm going tomorrow
Is not that far away

And I don't even know
Where I'm going tomorrow
Brings the light of day

Verse
Here we are once more
You can see that leaving me
Is gonna to be tonight

I've been warned before but now
It's started all over
I'm running all over again and again and again and again with...
Tomorrow

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It's cheesy... cliche... I know...
But every band needs a whiner "Wah-wah, you left me" song, doesn't it?

I don't know...
Last edited by scotty.knows on Wed Feb 27, 2008 8:18 pm, edited 2 times in total.
'Merikuh!




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It's not bad. I liked the chorus, anyway.
"The one thing you can't trade for your heart's desire is your heart."
Miles Vorkosigan

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I liked it. Yeah, every band needs a whiny song, but this one was good. But what do I know I listen to The Police.
-Courage is the art of being the only one who knows you're scared to death.

-There is no pleasure in having nothing to do; the fun is in having lots to do and not doing it.

-Violence reflects a severe lack of imagination.



Be steadfast as a tower that doth not bend its stately summit to the tempest’s shock.
— Dante Alighieri