This isn't really a poem. The little I know on the subject of poetry suggests that poems need to be spaced out, full of metaphor, stuffed with double meanings and utterly confusing.
This doesn't fill any of those requirements.
Of course I could be completely wrong, but I doubt it somewhat. And "freak" is not a nice word to call someone.
"TV makes sense. It has logic, structure, rules, and likeable leading men. In life, we have this. We have you." -Abed Nadir
Poetry is supposed to be a creative expression of your feelings, thoughts or experiences.
Twit is right, this isn't really poetry
You have a thought. You 'hate' this person, but now you need to make it poetry, not a diary entry.
Good poetry will allow the reader to feel what you feel, and will have some form of creative structure to make it interesting. Also you need to somehow make your word choices flow from thought to thought. Some people tend to think that poetry is just vomiting thoughts unto paper, but poetry is so much more than that. Poetry reflects the soul, gives meaning and understanding to things hidden, and delights the reader. Poetry without rhythm or rhyming structure is especially hard to do right, so with a bit of practice maybe you will be able to express your thoughts more tangibly next time.
why is it only one word long? and why that word instead of another? i don't see how one word can be a poem and i also don't see the relationship between the title and the word 'delete'.
Inside me is a skinny girl trying to get out... But usually I shut her up with chocolate.
