One Last Kiss

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One Last Kiss

Of all the word unspoken,
And all the thoughts unthought.
Of all the hearts it's broken,
And all the pain it's brought.

Of all the lies you told,
And all my shattered dreams.
Of all that will unfold,
And all I haven't seen.

Of all the time that's passed,
And all the tears I've cried.
This kiss will be our last,
Because our love has died.




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This is lovely. It's simple, but not lacking emotion, the rhyming works really well. I don't have anything bad to say about this, it's really pretty, and a little sad. Good work.
Matt.




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This is truely great work!! who says a short poem can't be better than a long one? wow!!!
"Am I that obvious? And if it's written on my face... I hope it never goes away." Pieces of me, Ashlee Simpson :)




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i like it, but the tital doesnt really show of the poem
lulu
I open my lunch box Hopin' to find a sandwich, an apple some cookies or cake but there, coiled and hissin' and set to unwind Is anouther big venemous poisonous snake leaving me hungry as can be you think my mother's mad at me?



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