I Am poetry

I'm in quite a poetic mood so why not -

your name: 'That which we call a rose By any other name would smell as sweet' so whether I be feline, flower or the essence of femininity. First, I be me.

I am: a dreamer whose dream has come and gone;
I wonder: could the stars replace my love with scorn?
I hear: the beating of a fading, withered heart.
I see: a life that's torn asunder, ripped apart.
I want: to know what's right and what is wrong.
I am: a dreamer whose dream has come and gone.

I pretend: that when I smile my happiness is true;
I feel: afraid to tell my past treachery to you.
I touch: the vale 'twixt what I am and what you see.
I worry: that when I am gone, you'll not remember me.
I cry: fifteen tears for you; for me there's just this one -
I am: a dreamer whose dream has come and gone.

I understand: much less than I would have you know.
I say: that when the truth is out, the lies have got to go.
I dream: that life was better before I dreamed of this;
I try: to twist the blood-stained cloth and wring it out to bliss.
I hope: that hope will leave my side; the nest forever flown.
I am: a dreamer whose dream has come and gone.

I really like this, kitty. It looks like you took time to do this. Either that or you're just that good. I like the fact that it rhymes. You're very good at this.

Have a great day everyone!

WOW i like it!

I just noticed this:

Suzanne said:

My only other issue with it is the fact that you never capitalize the pronoun I. Please respect grammar?

Why do you need to capitalize I...and screw grammar...I always hated grammar.

when i type i usually don't worry about grammor unless its something for school or something really important.

i'm glad you liked it buddadancer!

hope everyone is having a nice week!

i meant grammar. but you know.

Raven

i am: in love
i wonder: if you notice you got me hypnotized
i hear: your voice when I close my eyes
i see: you in my dreams
i want: you to love me back
i am: in love

i pretend: to be a princess, waiting for you to save me
i feel: like dying when I don't see your face
i touch: your name when the angels write it in the sky for me
i worry: that I love you for all the wrong reasons
i cry: when your beautiful brownish-green eyes look at me
i am: in love

i understand: that love is only a state of mind
i say: that only because I think love is blind
i dream: that some once upon a time you'll be mine
i try: so hard to get that happily ever after
i hope: you'll move on in my next chapter
i am: in love

your name: Beth

i am: the whisper
i wonder: what words i contain
i hear: only the thoughts in my mind
i see: only the truth behind
i want: only to give
i am: the wisper

i pretend: to be strong
i feel: like a fake
i touch: my heart
i worry: ill break
i cry: so silently
i am: the wisper

i understand: others worries
i say: that i know
i dream: of more
i try: so hard
i hope:to be heard
i am: the wisper

truly it is me.

I like it really I do. I only have one thing to say the first sentence is confusing

It says "your name: just call me ... A."

What is your name? How do you expect us to know who you are?

Well that is all I got to say. Good job with everything else. Practice your grammar though

I love this! This was really good!

Everyone else already pointed out the spelling and grammer mistakes do keep it up!

my first initial is an A. my name is Anna and so i just put A instead.
i'm glad you liked it. grammar is usually a big deal to me but since it's on a this, i am not to concerned with it, considering i was bored when i put it on here in the first place. Thank You for your input anyways!!! =)