Mistakes

Mistakes... You make them and I make them. So what will anyone do when everyone makes mistakes?

Hi, i see you're new. Maybe you haven't quite got the hang of this.

What's the idea behind this post exactly?

Hmm. Maybe you could add on to this? And try poem format? (See "Striving For Sometime" crit.)

Love ya, Maya!
xx
Courtneyyy
*teeth thing*

Disregard the above reviews. They're far too kind.

This is not poetry; it is a banal observation, one that has been made far too many times before. Please check out a book of poetry at your local library. That might help.

EDIT: Also, flaming my poem without reading it is hardly a mature response to an honest (if, I'll admit, overly blunt) critique. Please grow up.