Honestly?
It does nothing for me. I think I might be able to see what you were trying to do here, but it really just reads like a bunch of random words. They don't even seem to have any relation to each other.
What are you trying to say here? What do you want the reader to feel when they read this? I feel like your trying to express the idea of summer here; I keep thinking of watermelon and bare feet and whatnot, but the poem somehow fails to evoke much of anything.
