Sorrow

Haha, I can hear your thoughts now. "Wow, what a title!" This poem was written for a homework assignment for English. It was supposed to be a personification poem and the title was supposed to be the emotion/object we were writing about.

Okay, I'm going to stop my pointless 1 AM rambling and type up my poem now.

"Sorrow"

Sorrow expresses herself
By crying her tears of rain.
And they wash over everyone
Sorrow spreading herself out
Over the world.
And she'll never stop
Until she gets revenge
On those who did her wrong.

Its short yet sweet and almost full of goodness.
It needs a bit of tweaking. Maybe you should extend it a bit
Go into more detail about her feelings.

-Good Work
Genevieve
xxx

Gwenevire wrote:Its short yet sweet and almost full of goodness.
It needs a bit of tweaking. Maybe you should extend it a bit
Go into more detail about her feelings.

-Good Work
Genevieve
xxx

Thanks. I actually just left it as it was when I put it up here. My teacher said it had to be a max of 8 lines, and I had more stuff jotted under where it was in my personal notebook where I copied it that I meant to add, but I forgot. ^^;; I might edit more into it later when I'm not so blehh.