The Misunderstood

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Sitting in a swivel chair, staring at a blank screen. What’s something to talk about? What’s an interesting matter to work on? Something informational? Something that’s widely misunderstood? That’s sounds good, but what’s so widely misunderstood? In an informational essay, is it not good to write about a conflict that happens often in the world? Yes, so what is such a large conflict that happens in the world today? Religion.

People are constantly fighting each other over the simple reason of religion. Why? Because they do not always understand, or they do not agree. An informational essay is meant to inform its readers. So if this essay is to be about a widely misunderstood religion, then what religion? What religion do most fear? That’s an easy question to answer. Satanism.

To begin with, one should know a brief history of Satanism and its founder, Anton Szandor LaVey. Anton not only wrote The Satanic Bible, but also founded the Church of Satan. He took Satan’s symbol as the ultimate evil and changed it to a symbol of personal freedom and individuality. One of the most mocked, and also interesting, aspects of this religion coming about, is that Anton hadn’t started this religion from having a higher, or supernatural, entity coming to speak with him, much like how most other religions came about. Instead, LaVey confesses that he used his own insight to synthesize Satanism. He understood the human mind, and used the bases of earlier philosophers who promoted materialism and individuality.

Skipping past LaVey’s early life, one should first take a quick peek at the rules set up by the Church of Satan and The Satanic Bible, in which some of the aspects will be looked at further later on in this essay.

The “Nine Satanic Statements” start the off The Satanic Bible, and gives the foundation of what Satanism is, and are as follows, coming straight from The Satanic Bible:

1. Satan represents indulgence instead of abstinence.
2. Satan represents vital existence instead of spiritual pipe dreams.
3. Satan represents undefiled wisdom instead of hypocritical self-deceit.
4. Satan represents kindness to those who deserve it instead of love wasted on ingrates.
5. Satan represents vengeance instead of turning the other cheek.
6. Satan represents responsibility to the responsible instead of concern for psychic vampires.
7. Satan represents man as just another animal, sometimes better, more often worse than those that walk on all-fours, who, because of his “divine spiritual and intellectual development,” has become the most vicious animal of all.
8. Satan represents all of the so-called sins, as they all lead to physical, mental, or emotional gratification.
9. Satan has been the best friend the Church has ever had, as He has kept it in business all these years.

As one can see, these all play off natural human instinct, so one may find Satanism to be a natural choice, and easy to follow and understand. The next set of rules are named, “The Eleven Satanic Rules of the Earth”. These were found to be too frank and brutal, so they were only issued among members, hence they won’t be shown in this essay.

Moving on past those, one might think that Satanism has no rules and the Satanist just run wild. This assumption is wrong. Sins have been acknowledged. In fact, there are the “Nine Satanic Sins” in which a Satanist is to never break. These rules help one become one with themselves, indulging in their human flaws, their needs, their wants. “Do unto others as they have to you” is one of the sayings that Satanism has come to own, whereas Christians often follow, “Do unto others as you wish to be done unto you”. You are to be kind to others, until they are unkind to you. That is one thing that Satanism allows and encourages. It’s a normal feeling, which is why Satanism allows this.
Last edited by little.angelfire on Fri Nov 30, 2007 12:20 am, edited 1 time in total.
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I'm not sure if you should site where you got the statements from. I know that I was told to mention quotes and such with a sitation in the essay. someone else will have to confirm this though. don't feel like googleing it ;P. other wise I think your originality is good.

I think that the content matches to what they are looking for as well. you've given insite into the The Eleven Satanic Rules of the Earth and the sins so if the reader felt like it, they look them up themselves.

you only address one aspect as to what the essay will be about in your thesis. maybe give a little insight to how you will get the reader to understand the religion. otherwise the organization and stuff is up to par.

and I didn't notice any grammer errors or spelling errors. then again I tend to miss things.

good job sis!
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It's a very informative essay - it takes away all the common misconceptions of Satanism. It gets a bit too personal from time to time though, you seem to address the reader or write in an informal manner. Things like
take a quick peek

or
will not be addressed in this essay

should be avoided if possible, instead, try using more formal language for the first one, but I'm not quite sure how to correct the second one. Also, try not to use rhetorical questions - they're generally for speeches, not essays.
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Yes, religion is one of the most controversial topics around. It can grab anyone off the street and make them pay attention, but you didn't quite do Satanism the justice it deserved.

I have to agree with Billy, you are very informal in this essay. One thing I was told years ago by my favorite teacher-i.e. my mom- was that you should never say in your essay that you're writing an essay. I tend to write very informally too, but it's not that hard to switch over.

Just pretend that you're addressing the President of the United Sates, or wherever, and go from there.

If you really want to know how I would write it, I would have a contrast between Christianity and Satanism. I would have each of Satanism's official 11 points and the other 9 points and show how they contrast with Christianity.

I would also like to know what the 9 deadly sins of Satanism are. Never in an essay should you refer to information that you haven't listed out.

Anyway, it's an excellent topic, religions are some of the most controversial subjects out there. Just do some research and then your essay will come together.

I know this critique is a little hurried, but forgive me, I'm in a hurry.
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While on the topic of human nature, it is only natural that people have attached stereotypes to Satanism. One of the biggest stereotypes is that Satanists worship Satan, being falsely drawn in by the name. That is completely wrong. Satanists do not really “worship” anything. In fact, they mainly just use Satan as a symbol, His meaning being said before.

Some other stereotypes would include Satanists doing sacrificial rituals, which another widely spread belief among uninformed individuals is. These sacrifices usually said to be cats and other such animals. In truth, Satanists are not to harm any non human-animal.
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Then, of course, there’s also the people stereotyped with the religion. Black clothes, piercings, white face, lots of ‘funky’ or ‘odd’ makeup. This is true in some cases. Satanism encourages individuality, and modifying ones body in such a way is a perfect mechanism to define oneself. Though, not everyone does dress this way. Some just look like “normal” people, wearing whatever happens to be in style, and still wearing some type of pendant in which they use to represent their faith (usually being an upside down cross, which actually just came about to mock the Christian cross, or an inverted pentacle which can be used in occult rituals to direct forces or energies, and often represents the horned god-Pan-or various expressions of contemporary occultism, especially when a goat-head is superimposed on the inverted pentagram. )
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Sitting in a swivel chair, staring at a blank screen. What’s something to talk about? What’s an interesting matter to work on? Something informational? Something that’s widely misunderstood? That’s sounds good, but what’s so widely misunderstood? In an informational essay, is it not good to write about a conflict that happens often in the world? Yes, so what is such a large conflict that happens in the world today? Religion.

People are constantly fighting each other over the simple reason of religion. Why? Because they do not always understand, or they do not agree. An informational essay is meant to inform its readers. So if this essay is to be about a widely misunderstood religion, then what religion? What religion do most fear? That’s an easy question to answer. Satanism.

To begin with, one should know a brief history of Satanism and its founder, Anton Szandor LaVey. Anton not only wrote The Satanic Bible, but also founded the Church of Satan. He took Satan’s symbol as the ultimate evil and changed it to a symbol of personal freedom and individuality. One of the most mocked, and also interesting, aspects of this religion coming about, is that Anton hadn’t started this religion from having a higher, or supernatural, entity coming to speak with him, much like how most other religions came about. Instead, LaVey confesses that he used his own insight to synthesize Satanism. He understood the human mind, and used the bases of earlier philosophers who promoted materialism and individuality.

Skipping past LaVey’s early life, one should first take a quick peek at the rules set up by the Church of Satan and The Satanic Bible, in which some of the aspects will be looked at further later on in this essay.

The “Nine Satanic Statements” starts off The Satanic Bible, and gives the foundation of what Satanism is, and are as follows, coming straight from The Satanic Bible:

1. Satan represents indulgence instead of abstinence.
2. Satan represents vital existence instead of spiritual pipe dreams.
3. Satan represents undefiled wisdom instead of hypocritical self-deceit.
4. Satan represents kindness to those who deserve it instead of love wasted on ingrates.
5. Satan represents vengeance instead of turning the other cheek.
6. Satan represents responsibility to the responsible instead of concern for psychic vampires.
7. Satan represents man as just another animal, sometimes better, more often worse than those that walk on all-fours, who, because of his “divine spiritual and intellectual development,” has become the most vicious animal of all.
8. Satan represents all of the so-called sins, as they all lead to physical, mental, or emotional gratification.
9. Satan has been the best friend the Church has ever had, as He has kept it in business all these years.

As one can see, these all play off natural human instinct, so one may find Satanism to be a natural choice, and easy to follow and understand. The next set of rules are named, “The Eleven Satanic Rules of the Earth”. These were found to be too frank and brutal, so they were only issued among members, hence they won’t be shown in this essay.

Moving on past those, one might think that Satanism has no rules and the Satanist just run wild. This assumption is wrong. Sins have been acknowledged. In fact, there are the “Nine Satanic Sins” in which a Satanist is to never break. These rules help one become one with themselves, indulging in their human flaws, their needs, their wants. “Do unto others as they have to you” is one of the sayings that Satanism has come to own, whereas Christians often follow, “Do unto others as you wish to be done unto you”. You are to be kind to others, until they are unkind to you. That is one thing that Satanism allows and encourages. It’s a normal feeling, which is why Satanism allows this.

While on the topic of human nature, it is only natural that people have attached stereotypes to Satanism. One of the biggest stereotypes is that Satanists worship Satan, being falsely drawn in by the name. That is completely wrong. Satanists do not really “worship” anything. In fact, they mainly just use Satan as a symbol.

Some other stereotypes would include Satanists doing sacrificial rituals, which is another widely spread belief among uninformed individuals. These sacrifices are usually said to be cats and other such animals. In truth, Satanists are not to harm any non human-animal.

Then, of course, there’s also the people stereotyped with the religion. Black clothes, piercings, white face, lots of ‘funky’ or ‘odd’ makeup. This is true in some cases. Satanism encourages individuality, and modifying ones body in such a way is a perfect mechanism to define oneself. Though, not everyone does dress this way. Some just look like “normal” people, wearing whatever happens to be in style, and still wearing some type of pendant in which they use to represent their faith (usually being an upside down cross, which actually just came about to mock the Christian cross, or an inverted pentacle which can be used in occult rituals to direct forces or energies. It also often represents the horned god-Pan-or various expressions of contemporary occultism, especially when a goat-head is superimposed on the inverted pentagram. ) The meaning of the pentacle pointing out that, in fact, some do use spells and rituals, which is one stereotype that is quite true in a lot of instances, though not all. Of course, stereotypes are never easy to knock off, nor to get them all answered and corrected. It takes time, and knowledge.

With two pages full, the black print has spoken. Should one take this information seriously? Perhaps, to each their own. If any should be offended, the black text can’t apologize, for it only speaks the truth, and is only trying to help the world. Take pity on those that remain afraid of what is no longer unknown.
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