“The horror of Depression.”

I just edited it.

Depression happens for many different reasons; for example, loss of a job our being bullied. Depression does not only affect the person with the depression but, everyone around them. Everyone has depression at certain times and there are different ways to deal with it. Some ways are to take antidepressants and other ways are to see a psychologist. Depression can cause us to do things we would not normally do. For example, it might cause us to harm ourselves by perhaps, cutting ourselves. There are people that find enjoyment out of making us depressed because they are malicious. Personally, I think these people are crazy. But, there are people that want us to fell better. Also, depression can make us believe things that are not true, some people when they are depressed, believe that no one cares for them which, in just about all cases is untrue. Dieting and exercising can help cure depression. If you would like to contribute to this article please fell free to do so.

Hi! This was a little textbook- bland in places but otherwise OK.

Depression happens for many different reasons; some of these reasons include loss of job our being bullied

Get rid of the second 'reason'.

Everyone have depression at certain times and there are different ways to deal with it

'have' should be 'has'.

Some ways are to take antidepressants and other ways are to see a psychologist

Consider re-phrasing. For example:
One way is to take anti-depressants, whilst some people prefer to consult a psychologist.

Also, depression can make us believe things that are not true like, some people when they are depressed believe that no one cares for them witch, in just about all cases is untrue.

Please re-phrase this sentence. For example:
Also, depression can make people believe things that are not true. For example, some people start to think that no-one cares for them, which in nearly all cases is untrue.

Perhaps try adding in more about how some forms of depression can be solved by a healthy diet, keeping fit and active in both mind and body. If you need more info try some sites. I'm sure Wikipedia would have some info on depression.

Also, please try spacing it out more. This will both make it easier to read and add emphasis at certain points.

If you need any more help then feel free to pm me.

All the best,
Alainna
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