The scene with Ada was confusing. I didn't understand what was going on.
However, I did understand the beginning, and I think it's cool that he's black mailing the Commander.
"Don’t you dare finish that sentence.”
I loved this sentence!
“Will do, boss. Here’s your comp back. As for all of you, kiddies, keep all that in mind. One of you has to be a super, right?”
I don't really get this. If it's just a bunch of normal people that have never seen a super, how can any of them be a super? And how does this guy know that one of them is?
I didn't notice any mistakes when I read through it.
This planet has - or rather had - a problem, which was this: most of the people living on it were unhappy for pretty much all of the time. Many solutions were suggested for this problem, but most of these were largely concerned with the movement of small green pieces of paper, which was odd because on the whole it wasn't the small green pieces of paper that were unhappy. — Douglas Adams, The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy
