the gradual instant

*temporarily removed*

I...have no idea what to say. But in a good way. This was really good. I'm going out and saying that I loved it. The imagery was excellent. And it was just put together really nice.

Great Job!

Lots O' Luv,
Lindsay

*echoes Lindsay*

I really don't know what to say. This is really good, and really sweet, and really touching. I like this a lot... and there's nothing derogatory to say about this.

This is my favorite part:

the antiquity of your presence preserved
in dust streaks and the lingering perfume
you left on the door handles.

Strands of your hair still in the sink,
a forgotten crust on a breakfast plate;
barely enough (just enough)
to piece together a memory.

I love the imagery in the third stanza, and the last two lines. I actually was thinking about the funny little memories - the ones that get sprinkled all over your house, and your schools, and your neighborhood - just a couple of days ago. So I guess you could say that I got it right away.

Peace, love, chocolate,
Muffin