Reflection

Reality reflected
Life protected
Staring in the mirror
Seeing a void

Nothing doing
No words to say
Reality reflected
Blew it all away.

I liked this. It was short and sweet and I thought it flowed really well.

I especially liked the line "Seeing a void" and this is maybe for all the wrong reasons as when I read it, I referred back to my brain about those who do not like looking in mirrors for the fear of losing their soul, or evil souls coming back at them.

But yes, I liked.

I liked the first stanza, though a comma or two wouldn't go amiss. It flowed well and had good rhythm. I liked the alliteration of the first line, and I also enjoyed "seeing a void". (Admittedly, not for the same reasons as Lizzy. I'd never heard that before...)
I think I'd rework the second stanza. "Nothing doing" and "Blew it all away" sound a little odd to me, and I think that the stanza overall could do with a little polish and tightening, as it's weak in comparison with the first.
Hope this helps.

this is sweet and i loved the 'seeing a void' bit. its just totally unique. i'd say something about commas and stuff like that but im not too good with that myself. anyway gotta go.
keep writing!

This was simple and thought provoking. There's a world of possibilities to the reader, and that's cool.

I didn't like "blew it all away" either. I'm not sure, but I don't think that last line needs to rhyme with anything. The rest of the poem doesn't have a rhyme pattern, so I wouldn't suggest making it rhyme with any of the words in the poem.