A Dying Diction

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Warlock
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Wed Sep 26, 2007 4:03 pm
Warlock says... · Wed Sep 26, 2007 4:03 pm
I did like it, but I think when read the fact that it is one sentence made me open my mouth and go "Huh?" I had to read it a good 4 times :p

Nice imagery.

Your underestimating the power of pauses though :P Rework it i guess different style same subject.
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Evangelina
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Wed Sep 26, 2007 10:40 pm
Evangelina says... · Wed Sep 26, 2007 10:40 pm
Haha, will do, locky :D
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