Burned

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Sick and tired of all these games,,
Tell me when we’ll meet again.
I can’t decide if it’s too late,
To try to rearrange our fates.

I wish I could go back time,
But I’m afraid of what’d I’d find.
Is it to late to go back now,
and fix all mistakes somehow?

*You left me bleeding on the floor
Hungry hearts left wanting more
There’s a lesson to be learned
Play with fire you get burned.

I was out for love and now,
It’s all revenge I’d do without.
Trying to find out what was wrong,
But it’s just taken way too long.

You were everything me,
You filled my heart and made me see:
There is way more to this world,
That meets the eye, now it’s just hurt.

*CHORUS

There is so much to this life,
That I could do without,
But I will not give up now,
Just wish I could go back somehow….

*CHORUS
But that is not the question. Why we are here, that is the question. And we are blessed in this, that we happen to know the answer. Yes, in this immense confusion one thing alone is clear. We are waiting for Godot to come. -Beckett




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Like a lot of your stuff, JC - this is dark and it makes me think. That's a good thing, btw. :)

I like the chorus a lot, and the RHYMING!!! Yippee, I love ANYTHING with rhyming!

Is there a tune that this goes to?
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hehe, thanks.

There is a tune that goes to this, I play guitar, so yeah....There's a solo and tabs and everything. =D
But that is not the question. Why we are here, that is the question. And we are blessed in this, that we happen to know the answer. Yes, in this immense confusion one thing alone is clear. We are waiting for Godot to come. -Beckett




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i agree with ShadowTwit, it makes you think, and it's very well written
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I like alot of your stuff, and this just topped it all off!!! AWESOME! The only thing I have to say is make it longer so I can read more of it!!!!!! :D
"Don't be afarid of the darkness, for when it's dark you can see the stars." - Marching Band Family 2008.




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Thank you very much Nightmare =D

-JC
But that is not the question. Why we are here, that is the question. And we are blessed in this, that we happen to know the answer. Yes, in this immense confusion one thing alone is clear. We are waiting for Godot to come. -Beckett




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Impressing! I love it. It's smoothe and has original rhymes (not forced or anything) and it really does make you think plus I love dark stuff.
Keep on writing!!



Believe only half of what you see, and nothing that you hear.
— Edgar Allan Poe