Hello Kitty Steamboat

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CHORUS

Hello Kitty Steamboat
Hey, who's in charge here?
Hello Kitty Steamboat
De nada, De nada.
Hello Kitty Steamboat
What else can I say?
Hello Kitty Steamboat
De nada, De nada.

As I walked this lonely road,
Stranger things have unfold.
And I seek in my time,
To funtion on this detour in life.

Obsessions all collide.
We're on a hell of a ride.

CHORUS

Take me with on your Fairy tales.
And your lonely ambitions will unfold.
Page by page they all unravel,
Your characters are all on this,
oragami ship to nowhere.

Obessesions all collide.
We're on a hell of a ride.

CHORUS
Last edited by moosiegirl on Sat Jan 31, 2009 12:30 am, edited 3 times in total.
"I don't know what to say, so I'll just say what's in my heart... Baboom, Baboom, Baboom."
--Mel Brooks




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When I read the first couple of lines, I thought to myself, "No, she didn't seriously write this."

But, it suprised my. I actually found myself singing along to it. Quite a catchy song in fact.

It's this hell of a ride.

Change this to... we're on a
I think it'll flow better.

Other than this, I think it's a great song.

Congrats and kudos

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*twitch*

That was... CRAZY! XD it reminded me of this wicked crazy Japanese kid in my math class... but anyway...
I think you're crazy, maybe.




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I liked this alot too. Awesome!

Keep up the good work,

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may be wise for the rest of your life
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HOlas jin and wtf. lol it was actually kinda good...creepy good. LOL

It's unique...but i like it a lot. yayz for you. sys. lolz
midnight calls, inside jokes, great times
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