Uh, yeah, that'd be awesome if someone would crit my last entry to the action\adventure fantasy section. It's like, four of five pragraphs long, and it's been there since the 18th, and, for some reason, no one's critiqued it yet. I will crit a story of the first person to crit mine. Anyway, it's called "Demon", but it need a new title. Thanks!
BTW, please refrain from posting stuff like this in the lounge...after all, if everyone did it...well, we'd have a lot of requests. If you feel the need to do so, use your thread in the "About the Authors" category.
Got YWS? I do.
Lumi: Don't you drag my donobby into this. Lumi: He's the sweetest angel this side of hades.
