a sitting duck

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A sitting duck

Woman, please don't get offended,
I didn't mean what I said.
It's only one of those deep insecurities
you worry about so much


when I said that you were easy
I meant it metaphorically.
But you took the wrong way (typical)
it's the way it's meant to be


chorus
I didn't mean to make it sound so hard
I didn't mean to make it hurt you
when I said you were a sitting duck
all I meant was you were an easy
(so easy to squeeze)
(So hard to please)


you make it sound like a bad thing
you make it sound like a mistake
true, I may not be smooth with the girls
but at least I'm not a fake


chorus
I didn't mean to make it sound so hard
I didn't mean to make it hurt you
when I said you were a sitting duck
all I meant was you were an easy
(so easy to squeeze)
(So hard to please)


(fade out)
"yummy, yummy, yummy, i got food in my tummy"




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I really like this! It's comical in a way, but could also be an authentic story. Awesome rhymes, too! (squeeze, please)

I WANT MORE! MORE VERSES PLEASE!
my world isn't only beautiful
it is so far away




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do u write from experience or do u just make it up as u go?
"I don't know what to say, so I'll just say what's in my heart... Baboom, Baboom, Baboom."
--Mel Brooks



How odd I can have all this inside me and to you it’s just words.
— David Foster Wallace