Africa.

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I think America should go to Africa.

People are getting killed over in Africa because a group of people over there have no dignity for the other religions. I think we should send some of our army to Africa to stop the killing. Unfortunately, the war may go on for sometime because peace is hard to achieve. But, shouldn't we try to stop the killing? I think we should. I think it would be in everyone’s best interest if we were to stop the killing. Plus, I think Africa could use more humanitarian work. Also, instead of looking for bombs in Iraq that we may or may not ever find. Shouldn't we be helping to put a stoppage to the genocide? Also, I think that other nations should accommodate us in this effort of stopping the massacre. These genocides have happened in the past but it is time that we finally put a stop to them. I think we should make a petition and send it to our government telling them that this genocide needs to end. Please offer a notion on this, thanks. If you would like to sing to the petition please send your first and last name to me. Elaboration would be nice. Thanks for caring.




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... I don't know that this belongs in the Lit. forums, you know?




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this is not non fiction please replace to a non literary forum thread regarding such topics
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Nate wrote:Aye. This isn't a story, and I'm pretty sure you're not looking for a critique.

You have one of two options:
1) Make it longer and post it as an essay in the non-fiction forum

or

2) Join the Debate club


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