When we are given an idea of what will come, we will underestimate our enemy. Our enemy is no one, but ourselves. We will live in fear and despair. We will move through life as a shameful creature. Us as people decide what we do in our life. If it’s sitting at home beating the shit out of our wives, when we had one to many glasses of brandy. Or if we’re sitting at a business table, with countless faces looking at you. We as people can only decide what we are and what we do. This is rather a statement of fact over fiction. When we are given the option between rights or wrong, most will choose, not for the name sank of the choice or rather for money of power. This is rather how a politician gets his position of his higher power. What choose can merely destroy us or help us a grate deal. It is what we do in the end, which matters most. Don’t become a high powered freak, for the sake of money. Think god damn it, and live, for the right choice.
You get points for passion, but you need to proofread this. Due to how short it is, there really aren't any excuses for poor grammar, especially when you spell "great" as "grate."
If you choose to flesh this out, you will need to do more with it. How is it akin to how a politician gets his position of higher power? I'm afraid that didn't make sense to me. The same with the line before it. Because of the poor grammar, I couldn't make out what you're trying to say. However, my guess is you meant to say that most people will choose for money or power when given the option between what is right and what is wrong.
If you are indeed interested in philosophy, though, you will also need to ask yourself, what if money & power is the right choice sometimes? In what situations would that be true, and can you come up with a rule that spells it out? Perhaps something like, "In occasions of moral dillemas, it is inevitably the case that the person will choose what is powerful over what is right." Although that statement has severe logical flaws as well.
Anyways, keep on working on it and see if you can't develop your argument more.
