I don't think this is the right place for this: Other Fiction, along with the other Literary Forums, is for completed stories, unless they are novels, and in that case, completed chapters. If you're looking for ideas for your story, I suggest you post in Fiction Discussion & Tips, which can be found here: viewforum.php?f=74.
Feel free to PM me if you have any questions!
"All God does is watch us and kill us when we get boring. We must never, ever be boring." -Chuck Palahniuk
More than anything she wanted the world to be uncomplicated, for right and wrong to be as easily divided as the black and white sections of an Oreo. But the world was not a cookie. — Roshani Chokshi, Aru Shah and the Tree of Wishes