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PirateQueen
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Wed Mar 14, 2007 7:25 pm
PirateQueen says... · Wed Mar 14, 2007 7:25 pm
I saw some else write a haiku and was wonder if this is correct.

Please sign my guestbook
It's pages are very blank
Take a pin and sign
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Goldenheart
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Wed Mar 14, 2007 7:48 pm
Goldenheart says... · Wed Mar 14, 2007 7:48 pm
Hee hee!

Yes, I believe that's right! I do wonder, though... did you mean 'pen' instead of 'pin'?

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Wed Mar 14, 2007 7:49 pm
PirateQueen says... · Wed Mar 14, 2007 7:49 pm
hehe yes i meant pen not pin oops

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Thu Mar 15, 2007 12:35 am
erin says... · Thu Mar 15, 2007 12:35 am
yeah
this seems right and I will sign your guestbook so it won't be so empty :D
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Thu Mar 15, 2007 5:47 pm
BlackDove says... · Thu Mar 15, 2007 5:47 pm
Yep! That's right. 17 syllables makes a haiku. I used to write haiku's about butterflies. :lol: I'll sign your guest book.

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