Camp NovMo July '25| Diamonds

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Diamonds In The Rough



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-16+ Language (& mentions of drugs)
-Romantic Comedy
-Mystery/ Adventure/ Suspense


Carla Sanchez, the daughter of a druglord/diamond collector gets kidnapped by Reggie and Sia, two siblings, who are diamond thieves. As she tries to escape from their clutches, she finds herself falling for the older brother and wonders if it's time to forgive her father.

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Goal: I have a little challenge of rewriting and editing my novella in 10 days. I have 9 chapters, a prologue and epilogue, so that's that XD

word count now: 13K

After this I'm searching for beta-readers. So if you're interested let me know ^^




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I worked on the prologue. My plan is to have an amazing hook that keeps you at the edge of your seat by the end of the prologue and that's great. It works and is perfect! However, the beginning of the prologue is kinda meh (, but it works for now)

my favourite line: 'Of course, he was dying,' she thought.




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ooooo i love your original quote: "Better a diamond in the rough than one on a ring" :0 you got this, Nadya!! :D
mint, she/her


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'Of course, he was dying,' she thought.

this is also such a great line >.> why is there an "of course" before the "he was dying"? who's the "she"? the mystery!! xD
mint, she/her


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