"Who is She"

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She looks like she's hungry to devour all the bitter things of the world.
She can tear my heart apart with just her cool words and colder eyes.
She carries pain — untold, ancient suffering — woven into every breath.
The more I look at her hair, the deeper I am drawn into the mysteries of a dark, endless universe.
Whatever she touches disappears into a jar, a vessel from which nothing returns except the sound of waves —
calm, but heartbreakingly sad.

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Why should Caesar just get to stomp around like a giant while the rest of us try not to get smushed under his big feet? Brutus is just as cute as Caesar, right? Brutus is just as smart as Caesar, people totally like Brutus just as much as they like Caesar, and when did it become okay for one person to be the boss of everybody because that's not what Rome is about! We should totally just stab Caesar!
— Gretchen Wieners