Not Everyone

Not everyone can find something
That keeps them in the game,
Not everyone can prove to you
They've always had the strength.

Some people search for anything
For something that you've got,
You take it all for granted
But they still are searching on.

Nobody can solve everything
But everyone can help,
We all can get the inner strength
So go out there and fight.

your poems send a nice message. theworld right now needs it. great job.but you could have a positive title.
merry christmas.

Good poem, nice topic, might I recommend rhythm? The four-line stanza made me think of this as a rhythmic poem, and then I stumbled over the syllables. Yes, a positive title would be good.

i think it is a good peace of writing. and it has a good mesage about going out and achiving for your self. i escialy like the first two lines. i also think it needs a positive title though

I don't know what else to call it...any ideas?

It's a nice piece. As for a title idea, not sure. Try to encorporate the fact eveyone has streanth and wants. Try it.