Red Ribbon Week

If you feel the need,
To smoke the weed,
Or smoke some crack,
Just know it's whack.
Why not come to a peer,
And talk instead,
And get some help,
Before you're dead.

My class really seemed to like this. Hope you guys do to.
Pandora

I like this a lot, it has rhythm and character. The length is just right, it keeps the attention and makes an impression. Nice job!

cx

pandoraswritings--


This may be fine for an assignment. It is usually advisable, however, to refrain from being preachy in poetry you wish others to read and seriously respond to.

In general, if your purpose with poetry is to make moral statements, you can probably do it better with an essay.

Keep that in mind next time you write.


Best,
Brad

funny!!!

Incandescence wrote:pandoraswritings--


This may be fine for an assignment. It is usually advisable, however, to refrain from being preachy in poetry you wish others to read and seriously respond to.

In general, if your purpose with poetry is to make moral statements, you can probably do it better with an essay.

Keep that in mind next time you write.


Best,
Brad

I agree with this 100%. Its like you're saying "Drugs are bad, mkay?"

Hhehehe. Red Ribbon week and DARE=LOLZORZ