Anatomy Lesson 1

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Swottielottie
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Sun Oct 22, 2006 3:04 pm
Swottielottie says... · Sun Oct 22, 2006 3:04 pm
Thick red juice, pounds through the chambers
Lined with fuel, coated in poison

Millions of sacs, squeezed in two bags
Sorting bursts of air, pushing bad out

One sponge of purple juice, crinkled through and through
Controlling actions, processing thoughts

One lump of muscle, left and right
Beats life into the body, keeps us alive




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ConorR
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Sun Oct 22, 2006 5:14 pm
ConorR says... · Sun Oct 22, 2006 5:14 pm
hi i like this poem it really makes me think about the human body





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Meshugenah
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Sun Oct 22, 2006 5:36 pm
Meshugenah says... · Sun Oct 22, 2006 5:36 pm
Please only post your piece once. It will not get more reviews becuase it is in two forums.

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I would like to be the air that inhabits you for a moment only. I would like to be that unnoticed and that necessary.
— Margaret Atwood