To set an example (MY FIRST WRITING POST)

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To Set an Example.
-Slick Jimmy

Click-clack's with perfect repetitive beats.

Blank page became ideological explosion.

ne'er mine eye stray from the performance.

Sudden strain caused to these words.

Oddities appear with no reason. Shall be my friend, or fiend? Why would she cry not die? How could a cat row the boat, and not meow with goats?

Tricks they play mine tools of expression. Become they tools of obsession.

ne'er more they relay mine own minds eye. But Creator. Traitor. Betrayer.

Take back these things of taunt. Restore their rhythm.

Be certain to set them in their role.

Performances now lack with one less player.
Last edited by deleted on Wed Sep 27, 2006 2:32 pm, edited 3 times in total.




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This double post seems to be a rather large waste of space. Delete one or the other, please.
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Large waste of space? Understanding are these words as applied to myself, but my poem?

Ouch.

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Generally writing posts go... y'know, in the writing section.

Some crazy kind of post-modern random going on these days...
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Ok, i sent an email already. Dont know how to post to my portfolio.




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ok I reposted it in the poetry section, but can not delete this one.

Anyone know where the delete button is?

Please tell me.




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There aint one. Just ask for a mod to lock or delete it :).
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Thanks sureal.

HEy Mod, can you please lock or delete this?

Thanks.




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