Every Heart ~Unorthodox Version~

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The first time I listened to Every Heart by BoA, I felt that her version did no justice to the real song, as sung in the Japanese version. So I re-wrote it. I am currently in the process of aquiring this as an official remix :P But it may not be, I don't know.

There are 2 versions of this song, the first, Make-Up was after Maivboon said we needed to talk about our relationship, and Broke-Up is well... figure it out yourself.

EDIT: Note, the capital phrases are universal in all verions of the song, for when I get them translated into Japanese and Korean and maybe Mandarin and Cantonese...

Every Heart ~Unorthodox Version~

Make-Up

Tell me babe, how many times have I felt wrong?
EVERY HEART, no one's heart is gentle enough yet;
Why can'y you, can't you see my constant loneliness?
EVERY HEART, I don't know what to say or what I should do.

I was afraid of all things for I feared that I'd be left alone
So I prayed for help from the stars in our sky

Round and round the planets revolve around the sun
We are always seeking after what we have only lost
Our love is fading woo baby we can work it out
Look up at the sky our hearts shall never drift apart

Tell me now, haven't our smiles been enough?
EVERY HEART, I've never forgotten you in my dreams;
All I want, Is for us to last until the end
Whenever you feel sad, I wanna hold hold you and dry away your tears

Someday everyone's gonna be carefree and I will embrace all
Someday I hope all will find someone they love

Time goes on it never stops so we will find out
We'll live on together and we will find our own peace
Sometimes we will cry, sometimes we will smile on
Don't forget to believe yourself, tomorrow's one step on

Our warmest times are always on my mind
They'll be there because I felt that they were SO SWEET
There are many stars, I feel them speaking to my heart
They say, "Yes, you will never again feel alone,
...SO SHINE."

Round and round the planets revolve around the sun
We are always seeking after what we have only lost
Our love is dying woo baby we can work it out
Look up at the sky our hearts shall never drift apart

Time goes on it never stops so we will find out
We'll live on together and we will find our own peace
Sometimes we will cry, sometimes we will smile on
Don't forget to believe yourself, tomorrow's one step on

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Broke-Up

Tell me babe, how can I just leave someone I love?
EVERY HEART, I feel like my own heart is no longer there;
Didn't you, didn't you ever feel my inner thoughts?
EVERY HEART, I don't know what to say or what I should do.

I'm afraid of darkness for I feel that I was left alone
It seems like my prayers were never heard above

Round and round the planets revolve around the sun
I'm trying to find my heart for it seems like it is now lost
My soul's divining woo baby we're no longer one
Look up at the sky, every heart is shining on today

Tell me now, haven't my tries been enough?
EVERY HEART, you are no longer part of my dreams
All I want, is to find everlasting happiness
Whenever you feel sad, I won't be there to give you happiness

Someday everyone's gonna be carefree and I hope to be too
I hope someday I will find someone to love

Time goes on never stopping so I will find out
I can move on so I will find myself some needed peace
Sometimes I will cry but I will just carry on
Don't forget I believed you and now I feel like a fool

I don't want to seem like I'm desperate
I loved you, you loved me too and that was SO SWEET
We shared many thoughts, Now that all seems for naught
But I know, that we both can linger on
...SO SHINE

Round and round the planets revolve around the sun
I'm trying to find my heart for it seems like it is now lost
My soul's divining woo baby we're no longer one
Look up at the sky, every heart is shining on today

Time goes on never stopping so I will find out
I can move on so I will find myself some needed peace
Sometimes I will cry but I will just carry on
Don't forget I believed you and now I feel like a fool




I like the first one better... I wrote that one last night, so I've revised it more, and I just finished the second one now...

I can't wait to record it :P When I do, I'll post them on my blog.



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