Dying

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Please don't think that I am being morbid but I am writing about what I think death is like...

You close your eyes and drift away... unable to see, speak or move. You can hear, though. The continuous bleep of the monitor, usually. Suddenly, you feel empty. That is your soul leaving you... Now you can see them, but they can't see you. If you wanrt to, you can watch the preceedings. Your body getting placed into a coffin, your grieving family, the ones you love gone forever. Not many of us want to witness that, so we simply jump, and soar high. If you have been a good person, heaven's gates are open to you. If not, you will suffer eternal torment and agony forever more. However, all this will involve, is thoughts of your loved ones struggling, getting hurt, dying like you. In heaven, there will be a sense of knowing that they are all happy. Eternal bliss...




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Nice, though thats what I dont think 67%! Oh well, each one of us has different views!




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Interesting thoughts. I don't know what else to say.




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I guess you're a christian then?
I've also imagined writing to be something like that, though I hope heaven has more in store than just happy thoughts, but I guess I'm being greedy or something.
My life is a broken stair
Winding down a ruined tower
and leading no where




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I love it. I don't have the same belives as that but it still was very good.
***Honorary 11-Year-Old***

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I'm not actually Christian, no, but I do believe in heaven and stuff.



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