I always hated highschool

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(I feel obligated to at least try, so here are my notebook scratchings.)

Hey, Miss Beautiful
Can you feel the buzz?
Lithium is lying on your tongue
and you - you are still young,
in a map of painted faces
and the molting wings of grace,
all in this flurry of
the sentimental race
to taste - this bit of stranger things,
to join a world enclosed in danger,
to smash the candles,
burn the manger.

Hey, Miss Beautiful,
you are the lastest buzz.
Carpe Diem.




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this was very beautiful to me. i'm not quite sure what you were trying to communicate, but it was really cool and very pretty. i loved the lines "to join a world enclosed in danger, to smash the candles, burn the manger." gorgeous.
The Gryphon said, "It's all in the Queen's mind-they never cut off anyone's head, you know."

-Alice In WonderLand (Lewis Carrol)




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I don't usually enjoy rythming, but I think you pulled it off quite nicely.
The individual leads in actual fact a double life, one in which he is an end to himself and another in which he is a link in a chain which he serves against his will or at least independently of his will.
--SIGMUND FREUD



Yesterday is not ours to recover, but tomorrow is ours to win or lose.
— Lyndon B. Johnson