Can't tell if my poem has any impact??

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EverStorm
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Fri Dec 11, 2015 6:43 am
EverStorm says... · Fri Dec 11, 2015 6:43 am
I wrote a poem "It hurts... It really does..." and I can't tell if it provokes any emotions. Would anyone be wiling to provide feedback? (Im sorry I don't know how to put a link to it in this. I'm still new... Sorry)

Thanks to anyone who helps!
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Fri Dec 11, 2015 7:28 am
Poopsie says... · Fri Dec 11, 2015 7:28 am
link me bud
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