@DamianCyfer, I can see you are trying to turn this into a valid SB, but please go look at other examples of SBs before you continue with your story (if you really want to publish a story, please do so in the publishing center at the top of the webpage)
Former incarnations have been: TheWanderingWizard TheClockworkConjurer TheIllusiveIntellect TheSunderingSorceror And, TheMaieuticMesmerist
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