Okie Dokie. Probably can't get to it today, but I'll make an attempt. See, if I do get to it today, it won't be very good, so I'll wait until I have a bigger chunk of time, tomorrow maybe (heck, or maybe tonight, we'll see what happens). But I'll get to it soon, I promise! ^_^
No, it's not that you didn't succeed. You accomplished a lot, but, if you want to touch people, don't concentrate so much on rhyme and metre. Think more about what you want to say instead of how you're saying it. — LCDR Geordi La Forge