Unfortunately, I leave to head south tomorrow and won't be back until the end of July. I'll be here the week of the 14th... so anyway, sorry I didn't see this sooner, I could have got a post in.
IN THE MEANTIME (while I'm gone) Sure, you can get Eli arrested. Although maybe the club should suspect him first before the police take him in. I also know that Eli would be one who would run from the police, as opposed to just going quietly. But I won't be around to handle the chase so... BUT don't let that stop you. Have him get arrested or whatever, and I can backtrack a bit when I get back.
As for Israel becoming a feux-ally... EXCELLENT idea. I haven't really defined his character that much, sorry about that. Treat him like an older, wiser, and much more sarcastic version of Eli, I suppose. He can sort of act like a NPC... anyone can use him in their post, I won't get offended. (He's the antagonist, afterall. *ahem.*)
With all that being said, good luck you all, have fun, and do something dramatic. I'll see you in two weeks.
No more countin' dollars... we'll be countin' stars.
An angel, a knight, a man who will bring light to where there is only darkness, I am the Morning Star, the Bringer of Light, hail to me as I am King Lucifer!
I was actually about to point that out, they would have no reason to have Eli arrested beyond him having no alibi.
An angel, a knight, a man who will bring light to where there is only darkness, I am the Morning Star, the Bringer of Light, hail to me as I am King Lucifer!
But what if Eli had some sort of weird absences during the time she was missing? After all, he found Amanda... which is kinda the ideal excuse for someone *not* to have killed them. That's cause for suspicion.
"Be courageous and try to write in a way that scares you a little."
