MY ONLY FRIEND

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THE SONG I"M ABOUT TO WRITE IS OFF THE TOP OF MY HEAD> HOPE YOU LIKE IT:

Something sings to me
sings inside my dreams
no one can hear me
no one knows I"m here
but you

CHORUS:
You see right into my soul
you see me right through my fears
you see everything I hold
including all my tears
i bow down upon your presence
scream out my confessions
you come down to my knees
you lift me up on my feet
and for this I thank you father
for this I thank you brother
for this I thank you my friend
your there for me
till the end

As the nights get colder
i get smaller
fading away in the crowd
you stay by me
your my friend
beside me

CHORUS:
You see right into my soul
you see me right through my fears
you see everything I hold
including all my tears
i bow down upon your presence
scream out my confessions
you come down to my knees
you lift me up on my feet
and for this I thank you father
for this I thank you brother
for this I thank you my friend
your there for me
till the end
If someone must control your life
Then they must let you go
To experience life




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This is sweet. I have a weak spot for friendship poems. It needs a little work (expand, more description, etc.), but it's still pretty good. Keep writing. :-)

-*-*--Diana--*-*-
You say "crazy" like it's a bad thing...



We are great at fearing the wrong things.
— Hank Green