Ode to John Keats

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Ode to John Keats
Several days after having read "Ode on a Grecian Urn."

John Keats nudged my shoulder this morning softly;
I grumbled about the hour and looked out the window
at the sun that was barely up. “Come on, John, give
me five more minutes.” He just said “no” in a whisper,
flicked on my bedroom light, and walked away.

“Jesus Christ, John,” I said to him as I stepped barefoot
and sleepy down the stairs, “why are you such a bother?”
He just shrugged and kept on eating his cereal.
"Literature is strewn with the wreckage of men who have minded beyond reason the opinions of others."
-Virginia Woolf




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lol. Yeah that's kind of how I felt after having to read "Ode On a Grecian Urn." (I do really like Keats tho just not that poem in particular). :wink:

It feels like you should add more lines to the last stanza since the other one is so long. Other than that you really capture the feeling of reading Ode On a Grecian Urn - like getting woken up in the morning when you just want to sleep.
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