The poem doesn't strike deep emotion in my heart, but I love the POEM, itself. I'm head over heels for the rhyming pattern and the rhythm (which is a bit off at times, but it works out).
I love this poem! I especially like the first and second verse's! Well Done!
There’s nothing to do, There’s nothing to see
There’s no where to go, There’s no where to be
I’m just sitting alone, In this empty room
Writing my poem, I’m over the moon
I love this! I think it's the imagery that has me so fond of this poem -- "I trace the lines of your silhouette / And just like that, you’re gone." is probably my favorite part. I also enjoy the rhyme scheme it follows.
Great Poem! ^_^
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