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Fri Mar 29, 2013 5:24 pm
Lava says... · Fri Mar 29, 2013 5:24 pm
hi~

So. This year, I'm going to post only snippets of the poems. But anyway, feel free to poke around.

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1. lullabies lost on the highway
2. reduction in red
3. Papa's love
4. A nighttime tale of Parkinson's
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Mon Apr 01, 2013 9:05 am
Lava says... · Mon Apr 01, 2013 9:05 am
1. lullabies lost on the highway

Of whispers in the night's drunken wake
In the hallowed moonlight you stand
Like a scarecrow in a crop circle -
Behind you, you cannot see
The shadows of my soul in a quest
For shattered crystals from the sky.
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Wed Apr 03, 2013 3:16 pm
Hannah says... · Wed Apr 03, 2013 3:16 pm
Like a scarecrow in a crop circle


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Fri Apr 05, 2013 8:29 am
Lava says... · Fri Apr 05, 2013 8:29 am
reductions in red


It's calculated
Methodical like solving a determinant -
Determined
the quivering thoughts yield
As the tip hovering over her veins
Slices into seemingly silent;
Silence --

pausing the whispers of life
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Fri Apr 05, 2013 8:31 am
Lava says... · Fri Apr 05, 2013 8:31 am
papa's love
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Fri Apr 05, 2013 2:55 pm
Lava says... · Fri Apr 05, 2013 2:55 pm
teehee thanks, Hannahbobanana and Oddster! :)
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Sun Apr 07, 2013 5:11 am
primrose22 says... · Sun Apr 07, 2013 5:11 am
Lava wrote:1. lullabies lost on the highway

Of whispers in the night's drunken wake
In the hallowed moonlight you stand
Like a scarecrow in a crop circle -
Behind you, you cannot see
The shadows of my soul in a quest
For shattered crystals from the sky.


Oh my goodness this is gorgeous! Are you sure you can only post snippets??? I would love, love, love to see the rest of this poem. :) Please??
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