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I'd rather waltz than just walk through the forest. The trees keep the tempo and they sway in time. Quartet of crickets chime in for the chorus. If I were to pluck on your heart strings would you strum on mine?
Once, they meant something. They were important. Politeness, respect, kindness, thoughtfulness, reflected by these words. Now they're nothing but a bunch of letters stringed together on the thread of sarcasm shrouded behind the curtain of fake politeness. "Thank you." "Please." "Excuse me." Force of habit. Not thoughtful sentences. Not meaningful phrases. Just words. Empty words. That's all they are. That's all they ever will be.
I'd rather waltz than just walk through the forest. The trees keep the tempo and they sway in time. Quartet of crickets chime in for the chorus. If I were to pluck on your heart strings would you strum on mine?
Thanks, Audeh!~ :3 I wasn't paying attention to that, really. xD But thanks!
I'd rather waltz than just walk through the forest. The trees keep the tempo and they sway in time. Quartet of crickets chime in for the chorus. If I were to pluck on your heart strings would you strum on mine?
Running was never an option. Or was it? Were we so caught up in this mess; had we ventured too far into the forest to realize that the wind whispering through the trees urged us to leave quickly? That the rustling leaves were warning us, protecting us, stopping us. Protecting us from being harmed by the thorns and branches that we walked towards. Leading us to the roses that we never noticed, never cared about. Because we were too lost and too lonely and found solace in those thorns.
The scars remained after you had walked away from the thorns and I had crawled towards the roses. They didn't heal me; they didn't cure me. They dug deeper into my skin. But the scars fade as I stumble and find my way out of this forest. Out of this mess.
(...whut.)
I'd rather waltz than just walk through the forest. The trees keep the tempo and they sway in time. Quartet of crickets chime in for the chorus. If I were to pluck on your heart strings would you strum on mine?
Thanks Alfred! I honestly have no idea what I was writing, but thank you!
I'd rather waltz than just walk through the forest. The trees keep the tempo and they sway in time. Quartet of crickets chime in for the chorus. If I were to pluck on your heart strings would you strum on mine?
How much it hurts, I cannot say. But when the mind betrays and lets its guard down, memories return, the scars reopen and burn. Oh yes, they sting. And when no one is there, and no one can know, being alone... is it my only choice?
(Can I use an ellipses (sp?) in poetry? I do not know.)
I'd rather waltz than just walk through the forest. The trees keep the tempo and they sway in time. Quartet of crickets chime in for the chorus. If I were to pluck on your heart strings would you strum on mine?
P: You can use anything in poetry, Lems. I use all sorts of !@#!<< =^D messes. You make the rules, just make it effective and have a reason for it. Like, I can see what you're going for with that extra pause there at alone. It really emphasizes that feeling.
I'd rather waltz than just walk through the forest. The trees keep the tempo and they sway in time. Quartet of crickets chime in for the chorus. If I were to pluck on your heart strings would you strum on mine?
The trees stood tall, proud, mighty, powerful yet thoughtful, and giving.
And then the winter arrived bringing with it snow and ice, that slowly gathered on the leaves and branches that bent with fear of never being able to return; of not surviving the harsh winds. And the trees lost hope. Succumbing to their weak state they curled up their roots bent their heads and drifted off to sleep.
But soon, one fine morning, they felt heat. Warmth. Gently touching them, carressing their leaves awakening them from their deep sleep. Water trickled off their branches - the snow that had left them hopeless. And slowly, they turned their heads to face a bright sun shining its rays all over. And they looked up, and straightened, and regained their pride. They stood tall once more.
(Bonus points if anyone can guess what it's actually about! C: )
I'd rather waltz than just walk through the forest. The trees keep the tempo and they sway in time. Quartet of crickets chime in for the chorus. If I were to pluck on your heart strings would you strum on mine?