friends they can be loving, careing,and nicebut the other times they can back stab you talk about you behind your backbut yet you can't forget what they have done you still forgive
Wow! What's your friend done to you that you sound so aggrieved. I guess you were so aggrieved that you forgot something existed in this world that starts with a 'p' and ends with a 'n' and has got 11 letters.
Yeeeees, it's punctuation. Great going. Now, if you'd please insert those vital things in their positions and making it readable I'll consider reading it.
right. read a lot or apply some spell and grammer checks. for example:
friends they can be loving, caring, and nice but the other times they can backstab you talk about you behind your back but yet you can't forget what they have done you still forgive
still, after this, it isn't all that encapturing. try to apply some poetic language, rhythm, metaphors, similies - anything!
