Sent through the overgrowth

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Okay this is my first song lyric i have ever posted, and also one of my bands "not that good a" song

Hello there young boy,
I'm afraid its time for you to go.
It's a long walk, I'm sorry,
But it is the end of the show

You spent too long
Inside the world, hoping you'll finally see
you're prophecy
And what you were always meant to be

But it's too late
Your time is over
as you came across
the white cliffs of dover

It's too late to know
as you've seen your show
and your floating ghost
will be Sent through the Overgrowth

Fallen,
Stallen,
Crawlin' on the ground,
Wake up,
Make up,
Take up the life you lost,

and you realise
your foolish ways
as look into show
you just know

you just know
when you saw your own show
As you see your ghost
Fly through the overgrowth

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chocolate-teapot wrote:you're prophecy


^ correct me if i'm wrong but i have a feeling you meant to put 'your' and not 'you're'. you need to get this right or it'll end up meaning something completely different.

chocolate-teapot wrote: white cliffs of dover


^ ??? hmmm... this is ok but it looks like the rhyming is a bit forced.

chocolate-teapot wrote: Stallen


^ i would guess this is supposed to be: stallin' (as in stalling without g), never heard of stallen...

chocolate-teapot wrote:as look into show


^ something about this doesn't make sense.. maybe if you put a 'you' after 'as'...? i'm not sure.


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