Soft and pretty.
"Tired with the burden of haunting" is a great image. Or idea or whatever.
Nice job. You say alot with so few words.
Siempre, siempre: jardin de mi agonia, tu cuerpo fugitivo para siempre, la sangre de tus venas en mi boca, tu boca ya sin luz para mi muerte. -From 'Del amor imprevisto', Federico Garcia Lorca
well this is def a haiku and i like the imagery a lot but i prefer it when the sentences don't go over more than one line - that's just me of course and not everyone is going to think that so don't worry too much.
i like the idea of a 'heavy' ghost as ghosts are always thought of as being pretty weightless. lol
