I am me

I don't really like it myself but I have nothing better to do so I'm posting it..critiques are welcomed anyways.

I am me
By the way I act
The things I do
And the way I think

I know sometimes
I say stupid things
Make dumb jokes
And I am clumsy

But those are the things that make me special and unique
Those are all the things that make me who i am
And I am me

Eh, not much to critique. Unsubstantial as a poem. I'd say scratch it and start anew.

I am a guy so i am not supposed to say cute, so cool!

I liked this poem. It makes a clear point--that you are who you are. I think that's awesome! Keep it up!

-*-*--Diana--*-*-

I must agree with timjim. The point is clear, yes, almost too blatantly clear. You have an idea here and if you want to write a poem about, you do that, but think it over more. Think of examples, phrases that could convey your message more creatively and piece them together. Then you will have a poem with a clear message, but not lacking in creativity. Have fun with this and keep writing.

um, yeah, i'd start over. yes, it's cute, but that doesn't amount to much. try again.

It's cute, but very... plain, like straightforward. Poetry is more interest when it's less simple, and really mkes you think. This sounds almost liike a cheesy pop song, I think if you replaced some words, it might have potential.