Animals in writing

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Okay, so I have an outdoor setting but I need to work in the sounds of nature such as the sound of an owl. How do make it sound believable?




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It depends on the tone/PoV of the setting. Some scenes can get away with longer descriptions of animals in the background, while others demand faster descriptions of sounds. This is determined by what feel you're trying to accomplish, primarily, and how your PoV character is likely to notice the animals. If they wouldn't, then only mention animals when they notice them.

Usually, the slower the scene, the more time you can spend on background noise. That tends to get blocked out in times of stress, unless the PoV character wold be actively looking for the sounds of animals and every single one just makes him more nervous. But, still, that would determine the length of each sentence and the way sounds are described.
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