Night Furies

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   Redbox275
   Redbox275 · Dec 28, 2014

   I want as much feedback as I can get on my chapters.
   
   Their Date Chapter 1
   Their Date Chapter 2
   
   I specifically would like feedback on the quality of the story and character so far and specific grammer mistakes. Thanks
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   Pompadour
   Pompadour · Dec 28, 2014

   Elementárni ~ 3.1
   
   Hate on this and I will give you cookies.
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   thewritingdoc
   thewritingdoc · Dec 29, 2014

   Please review if you like poetry, por favor.
   
   Painted Men

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