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Other Lair of the Brumal Hunter (LMS VI: Post-Blizzard)

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    Remember this? (I sincerely doubt I'm talking to anyone but myself here. XD) Remember how I said LMS is over, but not for me?

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    He wonders if he should pull away after a few seconds, especially knowing that everyone else is watching him, but Mason shows no discomfort with maintaining the embrace (and indeed, he has none). Credence feels the heat rise to his cheeks in an embarrassed flush, but he can’t actually remember the last time he’d received a hug of unconditional support. Sky and Lotus, being fully aware of his feelings, don’t experience any second-hand embarrassment whatsoever and are actually happy for Credence. Mason, also, is happy just to support someone who very clearly needs it. Ember is the only one who thinks the situation is maybe a little awkward, but as long as nobody tries to hug him for that long — aside from the, err, really long hug he’s already had — he won’t complain.

    Eventually, Credence does pull away. He scratches the back of an ear, grimaces, and says, “Thanks, man.”

    “Anytime!” Mason replies, grinning widely and almost a bit too confidently, as if filled with overwhelming amounts of determination. It’s therefore not much of a surprise when he grins at everyone else and asks, “Does anyone else require a firm embrace?”

    “No, thanks,” Ember says immediately, turning the two words into one.

    Mason regards Lotus and Sky, almost daring them with his gaze. Sky chuckles and politely waves a hand side to side, but Lotus actually gives a cheeky smile and touches her chest-spike with her middle finger, also pointing it as if to say he’d have to be careful.

    “I’ve never hugged a centenarian before,” Mason says, winking at her. “Can the little old lady withstand such handsome might?”

    She utters a bold, hearty laugh, sinks into a crouch with one hand behind her (almost in a fencer’s pose), and then beckons him with a wave of her fingers.

    Mason laughs just as heartily before moving forwards to deliver the hug, as promised. He hugs Lotus slightly from the side to avoid impaling himself, but finds that she actually squeezes him harder than he does her. He makes a sound of surprise and then returns the hug more firmly. Even when he’s almost squashing her, she manages to apply very near to the same pressure. They release each other at the same time, and though Mason’s face speaks volumes about how impressed he is, Lotus herself seems perfectly modest and pleasant, as if nothing out of the ordinary had just occurred.

    “You are one sly jackal, miss,” Mason says, grinning and wagging a finger at her. Her response is to rest her hand on her spike and bow politely in thanks.

    “Did y’all just squish each other and nobody came away the winner?” Credence asks, gawking without realising it.

    “I believe we did,” Mason says proudly. “I have bigger uncles than me who would have gasped for breath in my position.”

    “Is this the kind of ‘big’ that one would typically associate with gasping for air?” Sky asks, trying to be delicate but not quite succeeding.

    “You’ll have to be more specific,” Mason says, to their dismay. “Lifting burgers and weights both have that effect on some people.”

    “Ah,” Sky says, grimacing sheepishly. “I meant the… former, really.”

    Mason nods, considering their question somewhat seriously. “I think it’s both. I had no lack of overweight relatives, but not everyone who is strong is fit, and not everyone who is fit is strong.”

    “Oh, I see,” Sky says, following again. “Does that mean you might have smaller uncles, or maybe aunts, who would be able to perform better?”

    He nods again. “I might have, but I get the feeling Lotus did not reach her ripe old age only by meditating for twelve hours a day. They would not be able to match her strength.”

    Lotus nods as well, the faintest trace of a coy smile on her lips, but for the most part, her expression is one of earnest agreement. Credence thinks its adorable, but he’s not sure if that’s an appropriate thing to think. Naturally, Lotus gives him a brief glance and an even briefer wink before looking back to Mason and Sky. He snorts and looks to the side, embarrassed to have forgotten already that she can sense his emotions.

    “We should probably move on towards the square again,” Mason says, folding his arms in a business-like manner. Despite his ‘mud’-stained shirt and tie, he still manages to give off quite the impression of casual confidence. “Credence, do you feel better prepared for the challenges ahead?”

    “I’d like to think so,” he says, shrugging, “but I can’t be sure until I’m in that position.” He’s certainly at least calm enough to be able to respond to the question with nonchalance rather than trepidation.

    Lotus and Ember are facing Credence, looking in the direction in which the group needs to proceed, and Credence is looking in the same direction, facing Mason. However, as Mason and Sky are looking towards Crendence, in the other direction, they both spot what the other three cannot.

    “Well, that’s a good thing,” Sky says a little nervously. “I’m sure some practice would help you feel much more confident about your abilities.”

    “What do you mean?” Credence asks, not liking the uncertain in Sky’s tone.

    Mason simply taps Credence’s shoulder and points behind him.

    Credit goes to Mason for having sufficiently calmed Credence down, as when he, Lotus, and Ember all turn to look at the small green monster approaching them, his only response is a weary sigh.

    “It’s fine. As long as we kill it quickly and don’t trap it, it probably won’t explode on us.”

    “Do we…?” Sky begins, hesitating. “…have to kill it?”

    Both Mason and Credence give them surprised looks, whereas Ember simply looks at them impassively. Lotus makes the wise decision not to look away from the little beast.

    “We don’t necessarily need to kill it,” Mason says, “but I can’t think of anything else except tossing it very far away.”

    “Is that what Credence meant with you playing sports?” Sky asks.

    “Yes. This doesn’t look to be that one, since it would have been more bruised. It could be.”


    BrumalHunter, reporting with his 1020 words for Week 44! I waited until Sunday again because good gods, did I need a break after last week. For me, this will be the first submission after my victory; for everyone else, it's merely one forgotten night.

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  2. Week 45! I again left it until Sunday, but I'm fully aware of my capabilities by now, so even though I only started writing at 22:45, I knew I'd have ample time to finish.

    Spoiler
    “I vote we just kill it,” Credence says flippantly. “I didn’t squash any spiders when I found them, but flies and mosquitoes were fair game. And those didn’t have the potential to blow up in my face.”

    Mason grimaces ever so slightly, but he turns it into a grin. “Certain types of flies and mosquitoes have the capacity to kill as well. I understand your reluctance to kill anything,” he says to Sky, “but the death of an insect or a small animal like that green one is nothing compared to the loss of sapient life.”

    Sky, naturally, senses that Mason is referring to his and his son’s deaths, and they’re also familiar with how many annual deaths still occur as a result of malaria, so it’s all they can do to limit their cringe and not overtly show visceral discomfort. “No, you’re right,” they say. “Maybe you’re both right. If it’s a liability leaving these… what should we call them?”

    Ember turns around and looks at the creature. Somehow, even though it’s coming closer, it’s as if it always stays the same distance away. Maybe Purgatory is trying to respect the conversation they’re having and wants to let them finish? Either way, he shrugs and looks back. “We could call it a Kuriboh.”

    Credence frowns in confusion. “A what?”

    “I don’t know what that is, either,” Sky admits.

    “It’s a monster from Yu-Gi-Oh,” Ember says, his expression and tone as deadpan as they’ve been so far. “It’s cute in a weird way and not very strong, but it gets stronger the more of them there are.”

    Credence shivers and looks a little ill. (He can’t become paler, since his fur is literally white.) “Do you think that might apply to these things too?”

    Ember turns to look at the approaching creature again. “Maybe. I don’t know. It won’t care what we call it, and what we call it probably won’t change what it is.” He turns to look at Credence again, and though his expression remains unchanged, he tries to sound more encouraging when he says, “I’ll help you. It’s like Mason said.”

    The rabbit laughs and scratches an ear. “Aww, man, y’all are making me sound needy and really insecure.” He’s only half-serious, but everyone fortunately understands he’s mostly joking.

    “I want to make Sin City safer,” Ember says quietly. “I vote we kill it before it kills anyone else.”

    Lotus puts a hand on Ember’s shoulder, smiles at him and then the group, and emanates the sticky warmth of the interior of a glasshouse, with the plants being protected against the elements and insects outside.

    Sky sighs in resignation, but in a good-natured way. “We all agree, more or less, that it’s better to protect each other and anyone else in the city than to spare every single being here. So, we…” They clearly struggle saying ‘kill’. “…eliminate the Kuribohs instead.”

    Credence puffs his chest out a little and says, “Don’t worry, Sky! You can leave it to Mason and me! The rest of you can help if you want, and we’ll always appreciate it, but if you want to sit this one out, we’ll be fine!” He smirks and nods confidently. “Trust me!”

    Sky chuckles behind a hand. “All right, go be our hero.”

    He’s pretty sure that’s either a tease or a flirt, but he’ll take it! Credence jogs on the spot, warming up and increasing his speed using his Agility technique. He then bolts off! Mason jogs after him, and Ember just casually follows them both. Sky and Lotus linger where they are, both fairly certain the younger participants have enough vigour and determination amongst themselves to deal with the threat.

    Once Credence nears the Kuriboh, which only takes a few seconds, it leaps through the air and recklessly throws itself at him. Credence simply sidesteps and spins around before using the little monster’s momentum against it and giving it a good kick. It soars through the air, cloaked in flames, towards the rest of the group, but Mason easily snatches it out of the air. When he does, the Kuriboh makes a noise akin to “ghwbluh” and looks distinctly uncomfortable being caught upside-down. Mason laughs heartily and tosses it high into the sky.

    “See if you can get it on its way down!” He claps in encouragement.

    “Oh, man!” Credence says before chuckling nervously. He’s hopping around, peering up at the sky, but he feels way more pumped by Mason’s words than he should be. The little thing is hard to keep in view, since the streetlights only dimly illuminate the street, and there’s nothing in the yawning sky to act as a backdrop. He does manage to see it as it comes back down, but he overcompensates and dashes too far. The Kuriboh hits the asphalt with another splattering noise before bouncing into the air. He’s able to manoeuvre into position in time and performs an overhead kick, sending the green ball flying back to Mason. Mason leaps into the air, but the fiery streak is too fast! “Did I score?!” Credence calls, eagerly trying to peer past Mason.

    “Nope,” Ember says. He’s caught the Kuriboh, oozing purple blood or slime, with his telekinesis. “I never liked playing ball. It’s boring.”

    “You’re supposed to use your hands, young man!” Mason says. He’s bent over in laughter, as if it were one of the most amusing things he’s ever seen. In truth, it’s the juxtaposition of his failure with the short teenager’s success that he finds so funny. There’s also a hint of admiration and pride in his laughter.

    “Why would I do that?” Ember asks. He’s confused and a little weirded out. There’s a reason you don’t see psychics playing football. Nevertheless, he tosses the ball — heh, monster — back to Mason.

    “Should we really be playing with it?” Sky asks in concern. “If it needs to die, that’s something I can understand, but isn’t this too much?”

    Mason nods in understanding. “Maybe you’re right. This isn’t sport, and if we’re going to kill it, we should do it swiftly and with dignity.” He regards the Kuriboh in his hand, which makes a faltering noise, before kneeling down and crushing it on the road. The monster makes a final hurt noise before evidently being properly squished and dead.

    “I suppose that’s it,” Sky says. They’re not convinced that was done with much dignity, and their stomach feels all twisted up, but at least it was swift in the end.

    Mason unceremoniously tosses it across the street. Sky makes a small noise of horror, but Mason dusts his hands and doesn’t hear. “Yes, that’s it. It won’t bother anyone again.”

    Credence is a little miffed that nobody’s commenting on his acrobatics, but it’s fine. He’ll get another chance to show off later.


    And it's 1138 words for the week specifically because I wanted to write a little extra and end the scene on a good note! Group 4 will start heading towards their miniboss at last, after which the end of Round 1 awaits all twenty participants! Ahhh, it's so exciting! But still a couple months off, most likely. Heh.
  3. Week 46! Same deal as last week, but come on, I was always going to fall back into this rhythm after Blizzard. XD

    Spoiler
    “Do we have to leave it out in the open like that?” Sky asks uncertainly.

    Mason looks from them to the dead monster and back. “What would you have us do? Would you like me to bury it?”

    “I…” Sky isn’t sure how to answer. They can sense that Mason isn’t being sarcastic or facetious — he’s literally just asking what they want him to do — but… Hmm. Perhaps they’re being too worried and not practical enough, even if it still feels wrong just to think of leaving a dead creature out on the street. “I don’t know,” they ultimately admit. “Is there another garbage container nearby? It’s awful even just to think of disposing of a corpse or carcass that way, but it should still count for something.”

    “If someone comes to empty the containers,” Mason says, “it would be removed and disposed of properly. But if this district of the city only recently came into existence, we can’t assume that. It’s just a trick to make it feel familiar to us. That’s why there was no garbage in the bin.”

    Sky makes a noise of surprise. “Yours wasn’t empty?”

    “Yours was?” Credence asks, equally surprised.

    “Mine had some trash bags in it, too,” Ember says. Lotus nods her agreement.

    “That’s very strange,” Mason says thoughtfully.

    “I think you still have a point,” Credence says, casually pointing at Mason as he says ‘point’. “If we dump it in the garbage, who knows if anyone will ever come for it? It might just start rotting.”

    “It might do that anyway,” Mason observes.

    “Oh. Right!”

    Sky frowns unhappily. “That’s all the more reason to do it properly. There’s nothing I could have done for the one I caused to explode, but for this one…”

    “If it distresses you,” Mason says, smiling in understanding, “I can make a plan.”

    Before Sky has any chance to protest, he leaps towards the nearest building’s wall and deftly and powerfully punches at the brickwork. It smashes and crumbles and flies away as if he were demolishing the side of a very large, sun-baked sand castle. Once he’s made a hole large enough for himself to climb through easily, he does so. Peering through it, the others see him proceed to a random square metre in the abandoned building before pummelling the tiles as well. He’s evidently created a burial site for the creature, as he collects it, places it inside the hole, and then covers it with the debris.

    He climbs back out of the hole, without anyone having said a word since he began, and dusts his hands again. “There!” He smiles brightly. “It has received more of a burial than it deserves or would otherwise get. If the buildings here are all a day old at the most, nobody owns them, which means nobody will complain about the smell.”

    “Who says there are bacteria here?” The group collectively turns to regard Ember. Lotus contemplates his words, but he just shrugs lightly. “It’s bacteria that decompose dead matter, but I don’t know if bacteria would even be in the afterlife. Maybe it would just stay like that forever.”

    Mason can see Sky is now distressed by that thought, so he says reassuringly, “Well, it’s out of the way and won’t bother anyone, so maybe nobody will bother it either. Maybe this whole district will disappear again once the round finishes.”

    Sky does actually feel reassured by that. “I hadn’t thought of it that way,” they say, “but it would make sense.”

    “I’m betting somebody at Superbia Square will know about that,” Credence says with zero subtlety.

    They lightly snicker. “You’re right; I’ve delayed us all long enough. Let’s go!” They reach out to pat Credence’s arm as he opens his mouth to speak. “And don’t worry about it.”

    He’d honestly forgotten they could basically sense his thoughts or emotions. Well, he didn’t really forget as much as he still hasn’t gotten quite used to it yet. Credence shrugs internally, since there’s not much point in thinking about it. He’ll just go with the flow and get used to it over time.

    The group finally continues on its way. Ember and Lotus are mostly silent, as expected, while Sky makes small talk with the other two about various topics. The latest one is regarding which hot beverages they prefer — Sky likes foamy beverages like cappuccinos and hot chocolate with a lot of cream; Mason takes his coffee strong and dark, made using freshly ground and roasted beans if possible; Credence sometimes drinks instant coffee with too much sugar but never really understood the appeal behind the whole deal (naturally, this sparks a lengthy explanation on all the things on which he’s missed out); Lotus drinks herbal tea without any sweeteners or milk; and Ember doesn’t have any opinion, as he’s never actually drunk coffee, tea, or hot chocolate (to everyone’s horror) — when Lotus politely interrupts the conversation to point beyond the row of buildings to their left.

    “Oh, I sense them too!” Sky says.

    “Sense what?” Credence asks. He still doesn’t really think either he or Ember missed out on much. They both drank sodas, which are way more refreshing!

    “There’s someone floating through the next street over.”

    “Floating?”

    Sky nods. “Yes, floating.”

    Their calm expression makes Credence wonder they’ve ever seen someone float before. He’s never met any floating sapients before, and he says as much, followed by, “Are you sure they’re sapient at all?”

    “Yes! They’re filled with a sense of uncertainty, concern, but also placid indifference and acceptance, almost resignation. We should go see what’s wrong!”

    Mason nods and leads the way, running some distance ahead until he finds an alley and cuts across. The others are shortly behind him, but it’s not exactly hard for them to keep up, as it turns out he’s the slowest member of the group. They find the source of the detected feelings: a pink… what looks like a root vegetable mouse or some such creature with stubby arms and legs, as well as two large, green, jagged leaves atop its head, almost like wings or a parachute.


    It's 1021 words. I think group 4's miniboss fight should start next week, since I don't plan on having their Homer say too much.
  4. Week 47! I chatted while writing, so I finished with only a few minutes left before midnight, haha.

    Spoiler
    “Greetings, Sinners!” the vegetable person says, smiling cheerfully as they continue to float past, their jagged leaves spinning around.

    “Sinners?” Sky asks, taken aback by the casual accusation and momentarily forgetting their concern for the individual.

    The rest of the group doesn’t react very positively either. Lotus is saddened, but she nevertheless wholly accepts the truth behind it. Ember feels a little uncomfortable, and Mason considers it a strange greeting to use, but it does make sense to him that Purgatory would be filled with many sinners looking to redeem themselves; after all, who never sins? Credence is offended, but he takes it in stride.

    “Does that mean you’re not a sinner too?” he asks.

    “I can’t be!” the person says, turning in the air to continue facing them as their apparent momentum continues taking them down the street, past the alley.

    “Why not?” Credence frowns. Isn’t that a little ridiculous to claim?

    “I came from the Hall of Origin, not from the Pit Beneath the Obelisk or from wherever you came!”

    Credence snickers. “The trash, apparently! I definitely haven’t seen any obelisk yet.”

    “Or a pit,” Mason points out.

    “Or that!”

    “Where are you going?” Sky asks, unsure why the person keeps floating away despite the continued exchange.

    “I don’t know!” the vegetable person says. “I can’t fly yet, so I float in whichever direction I was last moving.”

    “Can you not stop?” they ask, suddenly aware of the implication. Is Sin City in some kind of airless vacuum, considering that they don’t need to breathe? But then Sky inhales and feels their lungs fill with air, so no, it can’t be that. The spinning leaves also suggest some kind of movement through the air.

    “Not on my own! You can stop me, if you like.”

    Sky obliges, reaching out telekinetically, gently pulling the person closer, and then holding them in place once they’re within casual speaking distance. “Is this all right with you?”

    “It is!” the person says. “Thank you.”

    “You’re welcome, and thank you for talking to us. Why did you call us sinners? Is that a general greeting here? What are you?”

    “You’re obviously Sinners,” the person says. “You look different and confused. We call people what they are, and I’m the Eighth Floater of Our Immediate Vicinity!”

    “Floater?” Credence asks, even though the reason should be clear. (He’s simply confused that it seems to be worthy of mention.)

    “Eighth?” Sky asks, instead focusing on the more telling part of the explanation.

    “Yes!” the person says. “I used to be the ninth.”

    “What changed?”

    “Five died.”

    “Oh!” Sky covers their mouth with a hand. “I’m so sorry for your loss. Are you and the other floaters related, or are you just friends travelling together?”

    “We’re the same,” they say, “so yes, we’re related.”

    Sky frowns, aware that their meaning wasn’t interpreted entirely correctly. “I meant to ask if you’re family, sorry.”

    The person keeps smiling in the same, cheerful manner. “Homers don’t have families!” The expression is already becoming uncanny, but the contrast with the meaning of their words makes it eerier.

    Mason and Credence exchange concerned looks. Ember sees that and is a bit jealous at how they’re already close enough to be on the same wavelength like that.

    “So,” Sky begins, “people like us are called sinners, but people like you are called homers?”

    “Yeah, that’s it!”

    “What about small, green animals about your size, with a yellow appendage on their head? They’re cute but aggressive. And what about children that look like they’re wearing hats?”

    “Those are monsters, like the ones not many streets away from this one. And the children are the mayor’s daughters.”

    “Which way are the other monsters?” Mason asks urgently, tensing and ready to run.

    The vegetable person points in the direction from which they had come, and then to their left. “That way, three streets across.”

    Mason immediately sets off, but he stops after a second and a half, when he realises nobody else is following. “Why are you just standing there?” he asks, astonished and almost indignant.

    Sky was too absorbed in their attempt to get more information to consider that, much to their shame. They duck their head and break eye contact, even as they realise they’re still not moving.

    Credence shrugs. “Is it necessary to rush over there immediately? I dislike them as much as you, if not more.”

    “If there are multiple of the monsters present, don’t you think that’s a clear sign we should be there?”

    “Well, not really, since we should be finding Sup—”

    “Greetings, Seven!”

    Another vegetable person has floated into view from over the buildings lining the other end of the street. Their trajectory cuts diagonally across. Sky and Lotus immediately realise it’s in the direction that the other floater must have meant.

    “Greetings, Four!” the vegetable person next to Sky calls back.

    “I’m actually third now!”

    “Oh! Greetings, Three!”

    Sky feels their blood run cold and shivers. Lotus bolts off, even faster than Mason initially had. He’s relieved someone finally feels ready to take action and follows her. Ember is confused, and Credence also isn’t mentally following.

    After teleporting far across the street, to the nearest other alley within sight, Sky turns to the stationary pair and calls, “The floaters are being attacked and killed!”

    “Oh!” Credence and Ember exclaim at the same time. (For a fraction of a second, Ember feels vindicated regarding his jealousy just a couple minutes ago.)

    The group, then, is uniformly moving as quickly as it can to reach the remaining floaters and prevent any further casualties. When they practically explode onto the scene, they’re alarmed to see seven of the green monsters, as well as a large one, purple and with yellow whiskers. There are two more of the pink, floating Homers, but they’re both clinging to the walls of nearby buildings and slowly dragging themselves upwards. There are three other floaters that the group doesn’t recognise, two being green with yellow flowers that spin like discs, and a blue one with three dandelion-like growths extending from their head. The blue one alternates between conjuring and throwing exploding seed pods at the monsters, and darting through the air with surprising agility. The two green ones constantly zoom around at the opposite ends of a circle, scattering powders and spores.


    It's 1057 words, but unfortunately, I only got the characters to the miniboss. Their actual participation in the fight will only start after this. (Their Homer ended up saying more than I expected. XD)
  5. Week 48! I like finding appropriate music to set the tone for the scene, and Guide My Way from RWBY Volume 9 ended up being perfect for the job. B)

    Spoiler
    “Fly to safety, if you can!” Mason shouts.

    The scattered powders have put one of the green Kuribohs to… sleep? It looks that way to Mason, but to Credence, it’s not moving, which is good enough. Another one is moving more slowly, as if struggling through syrup, but the other five are still actively hopping around, trying to knock the pair of green floaters out of the air or spitting purple slime at them. The blue floater focuses on harassing the purple Kuriboh so as to distract it from the smaller floaters.

    “It won’t be safe as long as there are monsters around!” the blue floater calls back at Mason. Their silly shape is contrasted by the furious snarl on their lips and the glare in their eyes. They drop down, onto the monster, and grab and yank on one of its whiskers, shoving the other dandelion-like hand into its eye.

    Credence has ignored the exchange, dashing towards the unmoving green Kuriboh and dropkicking it down the road. Dead or alive, it won’t be an immediate issue. His arrival and aggression surprise a few of the others, who stop jumping to gape at him with open mouths. He doesn’t buy their act, and though a shiver of anxiety runs up his spine and down his arms, it’s different this time. He knows he can fight them, he knows they can die, and he knows they won’t even be able to touch him if he’s fast enough. He kicks one of them more weakly, just to drive his point across, and then jumps onto another one with one foot before kicking off and leaping into a somersault.

    He still has an audience to entertain, after all!

    Sky has never been in a fight before. They didn’t even fight the cute little animal back at the alley. They’re starting to think they should maybe have chosen to be a Blocker, like Lotus. They turn to look at the noble jackal beside them; her eyes are closed, she’s in some kind of martial arts stance, and… wow, her power is rippling off in waves! Her aura suddenly bursts into electricity, and in the twinkling of an eye, she’s jumped up and away! She’s actually flying through the air — or rather, levitating using electromagnetism and some sheer, fantastic power. Lotus stops mid-air in front of a green floater, gently catching them as their momentum carries them into her waiting arm. The other one tries to stop but isn’t entirely able to do so, so Lotus moves forwards and catches them too.

    Her head jerks to the side and Sky swears they can see a theatrical glint in Lotus’ eye before she blitzes out of the way of a blob of slime. She floats up to the roof of a building and releases her rescued Homers there. Sky can only just see their awestruck expressions, feeling a little awestruck themselves at the display. They look back to the fray to see Credence perform a flip and Mason wade into the cluster of Kuribohs, knocking them around like an upset rack of bowling balls.

    They reel in the determination of their teammates, hoping to distil it into courage of their own. The fear of the pink floaters at the rooftop across the street pierces through the borrowed resolve, but as Sky looks towards them, they find the necessity of protecting life to be the final push they need. They close their eyes, just like Lotus, and also just like Lotus, they condense their power before releasing it.

    They gasp! Like a balloon popping after being filled with too much air, psychic power explodes in a pulse outwards from their body. Sky marvels that they’re even still in one piece and didn’t accidentally do what the Kuriboh in the garbage container had done. The pulse lingers, the psychic energy spread out like a strange spider web across the road. But that’s not all — Sky feels a tugging on their power, and when they give in to it, they feel what could almost be a second explosion. Their power races in only one direction, though: towards Mason and the green monsters. Sky gasps and tries to drag the hurtling energy away from their ally. They succeed, but it’s more like they shove it away, and the energy, forming into something like a ball, rolls towards the oversized bowling pin of a purple Kuriboh. The ball explodes with a silent whoosh, and for the third time, Sky gasps as the monster is flung into the air and tossed aside.

    The blue floater is unharmed; Sky attributes it to luck or the floater’s good sense, but it’s actually thanks to Ember, who had sensed Sky’s burgeoning power and telekinetically moved the floater out of the way. Ember continues lightly pushing them away, towards the pair of frightened floaters. He’s gritting his teeth, trying his best to maintain his composure during his body’s uncontrollable shaking. He’s not as in tune with others’ emotions as Lotus or Sky, but he felt the same thing Sky did and copied their tactic. The gods know he wouldn’t have been able to remain standing if he’d been on his own.

    Credence takes over the beat-down from Mason, a blazing blur kicking the bowling-ball Kuribohs every which way, never staying in place for more than a second. Mason disengages so he can call up to the blue floater, “Eight and Three, or whatever their numbers are, are safe!” He points in the direction from which they’d all come. “They’re that way!”

    The floater shakes their head. “I’m everyone’s leader! I’m the lead floater! I let that cruel monster kill Five and Three! I have to do this for them too!”

    “The two dead are two dead!” Mason retorts. “Protect the seven living! They need you more! We’ll avenge your fallen!” He points at the purple one. “We’ll kill it for you! Go!”

    They grit their teeth, but they huddle the pink floaters closer and leap across the road to float with them towards the two green ones hiding behind Lotus. They gather those two as well and flee, a multi-coloured knot of more-than-weeds floating on a wind of their own creation. Lotus watches them go before diving back down into the street below.


    It's 1047 words, and I'll probably get at least another thousand out of the rest of the fight! >:D
  6. Week 49! I waited way too late to start writing this one. Dumbass. >_< XD

    But hey, I'm past 110K now! :D

    Spoiler
    None of the Kuribohs are actually dead yet, but Credence is venting his frustrations and ridding his fears by kicking them around and jumping over, around, onto, and off them. He’s barely able to keep track of where he is, never mind where he’s going, but if he’s confused, everyone else, the little monsters included, have little hope of following his movements and predicting his path. Lotus floats above the street so she can take in the sight and make sense of the chaos, as her job is to assist, but not to fight as well — not unless she can help it. Sky also wants to help, but they’re too flustered by the activity to know what to do, now that all the floaters have been ushered to safety. They can’t attack the same way they did last time, as Credence could very well be caught in the blast by accident.

    Ember doesn’t have much of an idea of what to do, either, so he just manifests a rippling screen of light energy in front of him and Sky, almost as if drawing a transparent curtain in front of them to hide from the violence. He jumps when a Kuriboh comes flying past him.

    “Sorry!” Credence calls, diverting his attention only long enough to call out the apology.

    Ember turns to look at the bruised monster and then gestures at it while glancing at Sky. “Do you want to take it or should I?”

    “I, err…” Sky exhales and feels their resolve exit their body alongside the breath. Just a moment ago, they were all hyped up, yet already, the feeling has subsided. Evaporated, really. “Go to sleep,” they said instead and wave their hand. Ripples of soft, soothing energy envelop the monster; its eyes close and it promptly begins snoring. It almost immediately starts drooling, which Sky finds surprisingly funny. They giggle despite the otherwise tense nature of their situation.

    “That works,” Ember says and shrugs.

    Mason has concluded the green Kuribohs are in capable hands — if the expression applied to bad situations and if hands were feet (or feet were hands?) — so he decides to tackle the problem of the bigger one. Literally tackle it, of course, but that wouldn’t possibly be his only plan, which he proves by lifting it onto his shoulders, grabbing it by the whiskers, and flinging it through the biggest window nearby. It just lies there, almost stunned. Mason thinks it would be an inappropriate time for a nap, but who knows how such animals think? He can’t even call that big one a fruit slug, since it’s just completely outside his mental framework. The whiskers are maybe similar to those of a catfish or koi, but it’s definitely not a fish either.

    Credence finally gives his furious fight a rest by kicking all the green footballs down either end of the street and jogging to stand next to the greater half of his team. He pants. “What’s Mason doing?”

    “Suplexing the big Kuriboh, if that’s the right term,” Ember says. His tone is deadpan, but it’s slightly more thoughtful than usual. “I wonder if we should call it something else,” he muses, clarifying the reason for his thoughtfulness.

    “Is this really the time for that?” Credence asks, hunched over. He might have overexerted himself a bit. “It’s a big purple monster that I don’t want exploding on me. That should be enough.”

    Sky grimaces slightly before saying, “You might not want to say that so often.”

    “Why not?” Credence looks up at them, still supporting himself with his hands on his legs.

    “You don’t want to manifest your fears by constantly stating them out loud.”

    “Oh!” He stands up straight, but not out of actual concern. It’s strange how quickly he got his breath back after that. “Does it have anything to do with that Law of Attraction thing?”

    “Essentially, yes.”

    “So, positive thoughts?” He chuckles and looks at the monster behind them. “Why is it asleep?”

    “I don’t know,” Ember says, looking instead at the purple one. “Mason didn’t do anything to it. Maybe we should call it the Kuribabylon?”

    “What?” Credence asks, looking at Ember, who also looks back at the same time, thereby obscuring the subject of his comment. “I didn’t Mason touch this one.”

    “He didn’t.” Fortunately, Ember is faster to catch on to the cause of the misunderstanding. “I was talking about the purple one. Sky put this one to sleep through hypnosis.”

    “Oh. That makes sense. We should stomp on it while it sleeps!”

    “No!” Sky cries out reflexively. When it earns them strange looks, they recover their composure and attempt to clarify, “Sorry, I meant to say: do we need to kill it while it’s asleep? The very thought of that feels…”

    They trail off as Lotus floats around so as to be in all three teammates’ view and waves her hand. She then points up and down the street. Curiously, all the other Kuribohs are asleep too.

    “They’re definitely not dead,” Credence says, experiencing a shiver up his arms. “Why are they all doing that?” He turns and glares at the hypnotised Kuriboh. “Why are y’all doing that?!”

    I don’t think it’s going to answer you,” Mason calls, drawing their attention. “What do we do? I’ve never seen animals do anything like this. Are they playing dead?” To himself more than them, he says, “It’s effective so far, I would say…”

    “Morally questionable or not,” Credence says angrily, almost stomping over to the snoozing monster, “I’m finishing this— Argh!”

    He recoils, staggering away, and pulls his large ears down. The sudden noise wasn’t just surprising, it was also painful, as if a firework had just exploded next to him. The other three are just as startled, though not as hurt by the sound. Ember nevertheless reacts as violently as Credence, if in a different direction: he holds his hands to his ears for only a moment before opening his ears, revealing eyelike spots. He shouts back at the Kuriboh, just as all of the other Kuribohs call out in unison, and hurls a blast of psychic energy at the monster.

    It’s instantly squashed into a bloody heap, like an apple that had rolled into the oncoming traffic.


    Damn, I almost wrote the same number of words as last week, with 1043! Just four short. :P But, err, the fight's not over yet, so until next week!
  7. I'm at the fabled Week 50, whoo! :DDD

    Spoiler
    Lotus looks up from also ducking her head and covering he ears; she pulls her lips into a flat expression of resignation at seeing the outcome. The impression of a chilly autumn wind blows past her, carrying with it the sound of dried, discarded leaves and its accompanying, acidic scent. Sky, not yet having seen the effects of Ember’s raw power, puts a hand over their mouth. Ember himself is panting angrily.

    He’s never been great with emotions, and things like unwanted touch or sudden, especially loud, noises have always made him react adversely, but he’s never actually had a problem with lashing out like this. Though he can’t fully grasp the nature of the powers and techniques that Serene and Our Grace had given him, he vaguely registers surprise through his anger at the Kuriboh. Why would it scream like that? It felt like someone had struck him in the face, except all over his body, all at once.

    Credence, meanwhile, feels like he’s imploding mentally. Dying wasn’t as awful as people had made it sound, but this? The constant… everything? Is this what Perdition would feel like, except so much worse? He didn’t think he was much of an anxious person alive, and he actually still doesn’t think that. So why is everything just so fucking much at the moment?

    He lets go of his ears, but he squeezes his eyes shut and grits his teeth as he angles himself away from the others. He’s supposed to be carefree and jovial. He’s supposed to share a laugh with friends and maybe goof around a little. So why can’t he feel anything but stressed?! It’s just the first round of the tournament and he already feels like he can’t take everything that’s going on. Every little emotion feels amplified to the extreme, and these little green shitheads just keep pissing him off!

    A touch on his shoulder makes him flinch and turn around to glare at the interruption. He immediately feels the anger turn to embarrassment as he gazes into what’s still the most gorgeous pair of pink eyes he’s ever seen, but even that then drains away. Into what, he’s not sure. He just feels tired all of a sudden, and the eyes smile at him, encouraging him to take a deep breath and remove himself from everything for a moment. He exhales, sighing himself to sleep.

    His body still feels tense. He’s lost to the black oblivion of unconsciousness when he feels an unexpected stab of pain. He jerks and spams, fighting the psychic intrusion — he’s even more confused when he finds a sense of reassurance filling him at the same time. It’s like being stabbed in the chest by your best friend while they coo and whisper to you, telling you everything will be all right even as they twist the blade. He fights, trying to push the white and green form away, wanting nothing to do with its false hope and predatory illusion. Maybe he’s gone insane. Maybe his mind has slipped the chains of reality now that it’s free from the physical world. But whatever splinters of delusion are working their way into his mind and body, he won’t be deceived! He won’t be tricked into thinking it’s Sky, one of the last kind people he’ll ever know!

    I’m sorry, the illusion says. It is me. I’m doing this for your own good. You’ll understand very soon! This will only take a moment.

    He arches his back and squirms and flails. He can’t possibly understand what’s going on, but if this is another of Giratina’s trials, if it’s some weird ability of those fucking Kuribohs, he won’t fall for it! If it’s possible to die in the afterlife, he’ll either fight it as long as he can, or he’ll choose that over torture!

    No, I promise it’s not that! the fake Sky says once again, still trying its best to lull him into complacency. It injects another surge of pain into his mind. This isn’t like being stabbed. It’s more like… having an arrow pulled from you! It has to come out so the wound can heal. It’ll all be over in what should feel like only a few seconds more.

    So… they are trying to kill him? It’s not just torture? Then Credence will fight! He’ll resist so he can see the real Sky again! And Mason, and Lotus, and Ember, and any of the other participants that make it further! He’s not done yet! He refuses to…! To give…

    Credence groans. At least, he intends to. When he pushes against the weight of his eyelids and looks up at the black void above Sin City, he actually lets out what’s more of a moan. Ember almost snickers at how much it sounds like a moan of pleasure, as if Sky had just given Credence a really painful but really enjoyable brain massage. (He does seem like the type to enjoy that.)

    Sky tries their best not to focus on the thought that just rolled off the teenager next to them. “Do you feel better now?” they ask the hopefully-no-longer-conflicted rabbit.

    Although he feels like freshly folded pasta, Credence is surprised to find he does feel better. “Yeah, I think so,” he says, sitting up. “Wait, what happened? Why was I lying down just now?” He looks around frantically, seeing the crushed Kuriboh and trying to tell if the snoring ones have moved yet. It doesn’t seem like it, but he can’t quite make out what’s going on. He sees Lotus at one end of the street and Mason at the other.

    “I used a technique called Dream Eater on you,” Sky explains. “Your mind was suffering under the weight of all the stresses it’s had to endure so far, so I put you to sleep and… well, this next part will be a bit awkward to explain, but I kind of… ate your worry?”

    Credence blinks. “What?”

    “I think you ate more than just that,” Ember says flatly When Credence shoots him an angry look, Ember’s mask cracks and he grins in mischief joy before slipping back into indifferent composure. Yet his eyes still show his amusement.


    It's 1035 words, and the hour actually passed faster than I'd thought. But hey, I was totally not in the mood to write at first, so that's great! I vented my frustration by having Sky use Dream Eater to remove Credence's. XDDD

    Next milestone: the legendary Week 50! B)
  8. Hah, that fail of mine last week. I meant Week 75. I think that, or maybe 72, is TinkerTwaggy's record too, so I have to try and equal that.

    For now, it's Week 51! One more to go before I hit the one-year milestone! :D

    Spoiler
    “Do you feel better now?” they ask gently. They giggle, realising they’d already asked that question. “More than before, at least.”

    Credence drinks deeply from the pool of energy he feels welling up inside him. He jumps to his feet and lets his wide grin speak for itself.

    Ember has a thought that could somewhat be described as typical for a teenager, which makes Sky half-scoff, half-gasp and look at him in a mixture of surprise, shock, and incredulity. The boy simply regards them with a flat expression, but the mischievous joy hiding behind his mask can’t remain hidden from Sky. Despite themselves, they giggle to themselves and look away from Ember towards Credence, pointedly ignoring further acknowledgement of Ember’s thoughts.

    “What?” Credence asks.

    Sky shakes their head. “Never mind him. You look ready to take on the entire pack of bag monsters on your own!”

    “I am!” he boasts, puffing his chest out. A second passes. “Wait, bag monsters? I thought we were calling them Kuribohs.”

    “Oh, we are! But what kind of monster would you call them? They look like plump, little, green bags with big lips and adorably ridiculous faces.”

    Another yell draws everyone’s attention to Mason, who chucks a sleeping Kuriboh closer towards the centre of the street, near his three teammates. He scowls. “These animals are proving to be a persistent nuisance. Maybe we should just bury them all in the street? If they explode and leave the road cratered, at least nobody should be around.” More to himself than to them, he adds, “Sin City’s infrastructure clearly doesn’t have any problems. The street might simply disappear.”

    “We definitely need to deal with these little assholes once for all,” Credence agrees. “Ember’s gotten to that one. What do y’all say? Do we crush the rest?”

    Lotus rolls another one closer to the Kuriboh Mason threw away, and her timing is impeccable, as it exclaims with the same painful intensity as the others before it, even if nobody is close enough to be damaged by it. It then stirs and rights itself. The five others, as well as the purple one that Mason had tossed through a window, follow suit — and all begin to advance on the group.

    Mason rolls all four shoulders and stretches his arms behind him. “Yes, I think it best to crush the rest.”

    The carpet of psychic energy that Sky had created has faded in the meantime, and though Ember isn’t able to summon one like that himself, he can create a different one. Before he does that, he condenses a fistful of willpower that then sparks to life as softly crackling electricity. Hoping his lack of ball-play doesn’t leave his aim terrible, he tosses the ball sideways towards the Kuribabylon. It travels rapidly through the air, and after flying over half the road, it bursts into a wave. His aim is off, but luckily for him, the wave is large enough to hit its target. The Kuribabylon halts its crawl, whether because it starts processing the effect to which its body has just been subjected, or whether the paralytic effect actually prevents it from moving any farther. Either way, Ember’s plan worked, so he nods to himself and then holds his hands out to the sides. He channels psychic energy in coils around his arm, which then turns into roiling mist that slithers onto the road. It splits into multiple streams that rapidly snake their way across the asphalt, expanding into a fluffy bank half a metre from the road. Once he finishes, he finds everyone else staring at him.

    “What? They spit acid. The mist will prevent you from being burned or poisoned. Their nap also fully healed them, so this’ll ensure they can’t do it again.”

    “Aww, man,” Credence says, quickly snapping out of his surprise. “That means all my work so far has been wasted.”

    “As the adults would say, you’re still young and full of vigour.”

    “I am an adult.”

    Ember looks to the side, towards a Kuriboh that has its closed eyes locked onto him. The silly impossibility of that image isn’t as pressing as the realisation that he doesn’t actually want to fight and kill for real. His sass evaporates, and were it not for the mist swirling around and between his legs, he would wonder if he could even do anything of note in a fight. He fidgets with a sleeve of his hoodie and says, “Okay, prove it and save the legal child from being attacked.”

    “That’s low,” Mason says, amused, “but we can all help there! Hwah!” He throws a full-body tackle at an approaching Kuriboh and twists to the side to land on it with his arm and elbow.

    “Watch this,” Credence says eagerly, turning from Mason’s display to the Kuriboh headed towards Ember. He leaps high into the air, performing a forwards somersault at the height of his ascension before being pulled down towards the Kuriboh. He slightly alters his trajectory by throwing his body out, correcting his course and landing with a heel on the stupid thing. It makes the same, satisfying, deflating noise as the one so many streets back. It feels like more than a month ago, but he’s only looking forwards right now. He kicks the appropriately described bag monster into the air, jogs a bit to his left, and then performs an overhead kick. It flies across the street, through the broken window, and collides full on with the purple scumbag. He laughs out loud in hype and pride.

    “Okay, that was pretty cool,” Ember admits. He gives a slight grimace and looks down. “Thanks.”

    “It was very cool,” Sky adds enthusiastically, hoping it will psyche Credence up even more (and it certainly does!). “Let’s show them what happens when they pick on innocent Homers!” They attempt their best dramatic pose, flinging a hand outwards and releasing a dazzling blast of light.

    Lotus levitates above a couple Kuribohs, both spitting small blobs of acid at her. Sky’s dazzling display distracts her, and when she looks back down, a blob is just about to hit her. She doesn’t have time to dodge, but when it should hit her, she instead finds her aura dissipating the magical energy contained inside the blob — something of which she wasn’t even aware up until that point. It vanishes harmlessly, so she grins and permits herself some flair of her own by creating a flare of her own, grasping at a thread of Sky’s attack, copying it, and launching it downwards. The blinded monsters bump into each other as a result, though they seem largely unaffected. It’s all the same to her and she smiles cheerfully at her younger friends.


    It's 1120 words! I actually almost forgot to write today, can you believe it? I was watching a survival competition, saying out loud how the participants just need to take it a day at a time, trying their best to survive just a bit longer. I compared it to LMS and boom! It struck me that I still have to write for Purgatory for the week. I had a bit of a dip, but I have so much still left in the tank, hah! I shan't rest until the novel is done! >:D
  9. Week 52! >:O That means it's been a year since I started writing for this novel! XO

    Spoiler
    “How did you do that?” Sky asks, impressed.

    Lotus floats over, looking back at the Kuribohs to check she’s out of danger, before emanating her uncertainty at the subject of the question.

    “Oh, right. How did you copy my Dazzling Gleam? I could tell it didn’t come from you.”

    The jackal smiles, now understanding, and projects the illusion of gossamer threads extending from her and connecting her to everyone else — and everything else, the big and small Kuribohs included. Realisation dawns on Sky, who once again is overcome by warmth and affection at seeing the full scope of Lotus’ empathy.

    Ember shakes his head in wry amusement at the two ladiii— Whoops, one lady and one ladylike person. —and how they can bond all marshmallow-like when there are deadly poison bag monsters around. Still, he lets them have their moment and instead runs over to help Credence and Mason.

    Mason recognises that the Kuribabylon needs to be taken down, but as long as the smaller Kuribohs are still around, that will be harder than it needs to be. So, after Credence kicks a green one against the purple one, Mason snatches it off the floor, pummels it with his three other arms, and then smashes it into the big one’s face. He drops it, takes a step back, and then stomps on the floor with the determination of one willing to move mountains. Jagged earth erupts from him towards the two monsters, visibly puncturing and killing the green one and sending the purple one reeling back.

    The other three Kuribohs are less interested in harassing Sky and Lotus and more in defending their leader. Ember quickly realises they’re converging on him and Credence, who only also realises it because of the direction of Ember’s anxious stare. (Ember thinks the rabbit needs to pay more attention, and the said rabbit thinks the same as he realised he was watching too much. Though hasn’t he been entertaining enough already?)

    “I don’t know if you’ve played D&D,” Ember says, patting Credence on the back (since he’s too short to reach his shoulder), “but pretend I just gave you bardic inspiration. You can take them. I hope.”

    “Played what?” Credence asks by way of answering.

    Ember sighs before shooting a glance to his left, taking a step back, and saying, “Dungeons and Dragons. Don’t worry about it.”

    “Man, I just jog and watch things on TV,” Credence says and chuckles. “You know, boring adult stuff.”

    He sticks out his tongue and means to build on Ember’s earlier request to ‘save the legal child from being attacked’, but as he starts moving towards the two Kuribohs on his right, the purple one behind him roars in fury at Mason’s attack, and the others all take up the call, compounding the sonic damage their cries inflict. Credence cringes at the noise, feeling like his mind is scrambled a bit, but he doesn’t flinch like before. He kicks one towards Ember, hoping he’ll catch it with his psychic powers. He feels the flames around his trainer burn hotter than normally as Ember’s supportive energy flows into the attack.

    “I hate when they do that!”

    Ember’s link with the energy he transferred to Credence makes him fully aware of the Kuriboh being kicked his way. He raises his hand, arresting its movement, and then launches an orb of blue energy at it, scowling. The energy whirls around and batters the monster for a second before it drops to the ground, looking like an abused shirt with a do-not-tumble-dry label.

    He glares at the Kuriboh to his left and slaps it with a psychic wave. “You can say that again.” He then turns to look at the purple one. “The Kuribabylon is strengthened by the others.”

    Mason, hearing that in spite of his continuous circuit around the Kuribabylon while maintaining a constant flurry of blows, leaps back and tackles the monster. He pulls it into a bear-hug, hoists it onto his shoulders, and then runs towards the window. He jumps and holds it underneath him, landing on one of the Kuriboh to Ember’s left with the combined weight of two hefty fighters. The white mist billows away dramatically.

    “That makes one fewer!”

    Credence realises Ember has actually killed two Kuribohs now, and with Mason having scored another point himself, they’re totalled at two (counting the one from earlier). He himself is still only at one from what feels like a couple months ago, so he feels driven to prove himself. He jogs on the spot to build up speed and then darts towards the last Kuriboh on their side. He steps on it with a fire-cloaked trainer before shooting past, making a near-impossible U-turn, stepping on it again, and then repeating the process. He becomes faster and faster with each pass until he’s just a fiery blur. When he finally realises he’s making himself dizzy with the insane momentum he has, he peels off to run in a short circle and slow down.

    The Kuriboh looks like it got in the way of multiple bullet trains from Perdition. Credence puffs out his chest, and to his joy, Mason purses his lips in a comically impressed expression and gives him two thumbs-up.

    “Worth it!” Credence pants. He looks to Sky, grinning and hoping they saw it as well.

    And Sky did, by pure chance! Lotus has been channelling energy to them in the meantime, much like Ember did with Credence, since they are the Blocker and Sky, the Attacker. They mostly blind the Kuribohs with more dazzling displays, predict their locations a few seconds into the future, and then create pockets of psychic energy that erupt right when the Kuribohs are predicted to venture into them. The latest eruption flung the Kuribohs away like cabbages rolling away from an upset cart, and following the one’s rolling path, Sky’s gaze was led towards Credence’s dashing display. When their eyes meet, Sky’s face turns hot at the sappy romanticism of the moment, but they don’t avert their gaze.


    It's 1006 words, and it felt like this just kept dragging on, since I'm super fatigued due to lack of sleep. Also, this is probably the longest miniboss fight so far. But the timing is perfect! Next week is Purgatory's one-year anniversary, and Round 1 will finally move towards the final group stage (shh, don't tell the participants). XD
  10. Week 53! >:O

    I'd have hoped I could celebrate the official one-year anniversary of LMS VI by submitting my entry on Tuesday, like I'd done during Week 1, but alas, I kept delaying and then also got fucked over by technology. I lost some of my writing but was able to recover most of it. Thank goodness for having learned from past issues.

    Spoiler
    “How did you do that?” Sky asks, impressed.

    Lotus floats over, looking back at the Kuribohs to check she’s out of danger, before emanating her uncertainty at the subject of the question.

    “Oh, right. How did you copy my Dazzling Gleam? I could tell it didn’t come from you.”

    The jackal smiles, now understanding, and projects the illusion of gossamer threads extending from her and connecting her to everyone else — and everything else, the big and small Kuribohs included. Realisation dawns on Sky, who once again is overcome by warmth and affection at seeing the full scope of Lotus’ empathy.

    Ember shakes his head in wry amusement at the two ladiii— Whoops, one lady and one ladylike person. —and how they can bond all marshmallow-like when there are deadly poison bag monsters around. Still, he lets them have their moment and instead runs over to help Credence and Mason. He ensures to give the one closest to Sky a wide berth so it doesn’t decide to follow him, but it just looks like it’s standing around anyway. It almost seems annoyed, like it’s impatiently waiting for Sky to remember they were supposed to be fighting it. (If it’s offended at its chosen target deciding to ignore it, yet still willing to wait for them to focus on them again, the Kuribohs are a lot more patient than Ember would have guessed!)

    In the meantime, Mason has recognised that the Kuribabylon needs to be taken down and wants to change his priorities, but as long as the smaller Kuribohs are still around, that will be harder than it needs to be. So, after Credence kicks another green one against the purple one, Mason abandons the one he’s already beaten to a pulp and leaps through the broken window. He snatches the kicked monster off the floor, pummels it with his three other arms, and then smashes it into the big one’s face. The previous green Kuriboh that Credence had kicked into the room then takes a spit at Mason. It doesn’t hit him in the face like the very first one he’d encountered, but the purple spit burns like acid. He grits his teeth before grabbing the little offender and wiping it against his arm like a rubbery soap. With a Kuriboh in both of his lower hands, he smashes them together twice before tossing them at the “base” (for lack of being able to call it “feet”) of the Kuribabylon. To finish them off, he takes a step back and stomps on the floor with the determination of one willing to move mountains. Jagged earth erupts from him towards the three monsters, visibly puncturing and killing the green ones and sending the purple one reeling back.

    The other three Kuribohs, somehow noticing the commotion inside Mason’s building, suddenly become less interested in harassing Sky and Lotus and more in defending their leader. Ember quickly realises they’re converging on him and Credence, who only also realises it because of the direction of Ember’s anxious stare. (Ember thinks the rabbit needs to pay more attention, and the said rabbit thinks the same as he realised he was watching too much. Though hasn’t he been entertaining enough already?)

    “I don’t know if you’ve played D&D,” Ember says, patting Credence on the back (since he’s too short to reach his shoulder), “but pretend I just gave you bardic inspiration. You can take them. I hope.”

    “Played what?” Credence asks by way of answering.

    Ember sighs before shooting a glance to his left, taking a step back, and saying, “Dungeons and Dragons. Don’t worry about it.”

    “Man, I just jog and watch things on TV,” Credence says and chuckles. “You know, boring adult stuff.”

    He sticks out his tongue and means to build on Ember’s earlier request to ‘save the legal child from being attacked’, but as he starts moving towards the two Kuribohs on his right, the purple one behind him roars in fury at Mason’s attack, and the others all take up the call, compounding the sonic damage their cries inflict. Credence cringes at the noise, feeling like his mind is scrambled a bit, but he doesn’t flinch like before. He kicks one towards Ember, hoping he’ll catch it with his psychic powers. He feels the flames around his trainer burn hotter than normally as Ember’s supportive energy flows into the attack.

    “I hate when they do that!”

    Ember’s link with the energy he transferred to Credence makes him fully aware of the Kuriboh being kicked his way. He raises his hand, arresting its movement, and then launches an orb of blue energy at it, scowling. The energy whirls around and batters the monster for a second before it drops to the ground, looking like an abused shirt with a do-not-tumble-dry label.

    He then glares at the Kuriboh to his left and slaps it with a psychic wave. “You can say that again.” He turns to look at the purple one as a thought occurs. “The Kuribabylon is strengthened by the others.”

    Mason, hearing that in spite of his continuous circuit around the Kuribabylon while maintaining a constant flurry of blows, leaps back and tackles the monster. He pulls it into a bear-hug, hoists it onto his shoulders, bangs its head against the protruding formation of jagged rock, and then runs towards the window. He jumps and holds it underneath him, thus landing on the Kuriboh the farthest to Ember’s left, the one Mason had beaten up before but not quite killed, with the combined weight of two hefty fighters. The white mist billows away dramatically.

    “That makes for another one fewer!”

    Credence realises Ember has actually killed two Kuribohs now, and with Mason having scored another point himself, they’re at a combined total of five (technically six, if he were to include the one Mason had “buried” earlier). He himself is still only at one from what feels like a couple months ago, so he feels driven to prove himself. He jogs on the spot to build up speed and then darts towards the last Kuriboh on their side. He steps on it with a fire-cloaked trainer before shooting past, making a near-impossible U-turn, stepping on it again, and then repeating the process. He becomes faster and faster with each pass until he’s just a fiery blur. When he finally realises he’s making himself dizzy with the insane momentum he has, he peels off to run in a short circle and slow down.

    The Kuriboh looks like it got in the way of multiple bullet trains from Perdition. Credence puffs out his chest, and to his joy, Mason purses his lips in a comically impressed expression and gives him two thumbs-up.

    “Worth it!” Credence pants. He looks to Sky, grinning and hoping they saw it as well.

    And Sky did, by pure chance! Lotus has been channelling energy to them in the meantime, much like Ember did with Credence, since they are the Blocker and Sky, the Attacker. Sky has mostly been blinding the last of the Kuribohs with more dazzling displays, predicting its location a few seconds into the future, and then creating pockets of psychic energy that erupt right when the Kuriboh is predicted to venture into them. The latest eruption flung the Kuriboh away like a cabbage rolling off a poorly balanced cart, and following its path along the road, Sky’s gaze was led towards Credence’s dashing display. When their eyes meet, Sky’s face turns hot at the sappy romanticism of the moment, but they don’t avert their gaze.

    “Are you going to finish it off or what?” Ember asks, gesturing at the dazed and nearly dead Kuriboh. He’s still a little surprised at how easily he killed his second one, but they are monsters, and it’s not like death is anything new to him, so he’s already somewhat desensitised to the idea of dispatching monsters.

    Sky, naturally, is far less enthusiastic about the idea. The bag monster that had exploded in the alley was purely an accident. But to deliberately ki—

    It flies through the air, a now-fiery bag of poison and acid. Credence had seen Sky’s dilemma and decided to remove the choice for them. He shrugs and grimaces apologetically. “Sorry. I could tell you were having a hard time.”

    They nod in acknowledgement and appreciation, though they still have a knot in their stomach as they turn to look at where the Kuriboh had landed and rolled to a halt. Lotus rests a hand on their shoulder in support.

    The Kuribabylon also saw the demise of the last of its minions. It roars in fury and flails around, thrashing anyone nearby. Mason steadies himself before taking the hit, and Ember gasps before creating a shimmering shield to block the blow, but Credence is caught off guard and knocked over.

    He hits the ground and scrapes his arm in his attempt to shield his head. He didn’t realise it was possible to bleed in the afterlife, yet there he is, bleeding on the asphalt! He growls under his breath and jumps back to his feet. “All right! I’ve had enough of you fucking scumbags!”

    “Wait for it to calm down before trying to kick it, Credence!” Mason calls. “And the rest of you, attack it from afar and keep your distance!”

    His words carry greater weight than everyone else initially realises, but when they position themselves for this final phase of the battle, they realise they feel emboldened and better prepared to defend themselves against its attacks. Sky renews the dwindling mist covering the road, ensuring their allies remain protected against poison and any severe acid burns. Ember puts more distance between himself and the Kuribabylon and folds luminous layers of energy around Credence and Mason to mitigate some of the damage of any further attacks. Lotus floats over to the two men and hovers above them. She closes her eyes and emanates a soothing azure aura. A small curtain of watery beads forms between her palms, which she scatters when she pulls her hands away from each other.

    “Whoa, that’s so cool, thanks!” Credence calls up to her when he sees the water droplets gather around his abrasion and not only staunch the bleeding, but also knit his skin closed.

    Mason finds the droplets simply cling randomly to his form before being absorbed. He feels reinvigorated and more than ready to conclude the fight. “Thank you, Lotus!” he calls as well.

    She opens her eyes again and nods pleasantly. Her expression becomes neutral with concern when she swoops down and pulls Credence to the side. A black blob of bile shoots past them as the Kuribabylon suddenly ceases its tantrum and belches at the first foe to re-enter its vision.

    “Unless you’re also going to do something mystical,” Mason shouts, suppressing a chuckle, “you keep your eyes open!”

    Credence scoffs. “Thanks, I hadn’t considered that!”

    The purple bag of poison puckers its lips to make another spitting attempt, but an explosion of psychic energy underneath it flips it upside-down before it gets the chance. Sky cheers at the sheer amount of power their attack contained; Ember, having moved over to them and augmented their psychic power with his own, gives a small smile of appreciation at what is indeed an impressive effect.

    “Excellent!” Mason calls out, barking out a laugh and descending onto the blob, a bluish-grey blur as he lands blow after blow.

    Lotus manifests tiny pellets of aura and tosses them at regular intervals towards Credence, who joins in the laughter and kicks them towards the monster, covering the pellets in fire and effectively creating a two-person fire-peashooter.

    Under the combined assault of body, mind, and spirit, the Kuribabylon barely has the time to choose a target before being tipped over by repeated psychic explosions. In fact, the time between the explosions decreases the more time passes, as Sky and Ember both find a steady rhythm and have little need to adjust their aim.


    I've written 1023 words for this week, but it's late because of everything mentioned above and because I had to edit last week's entry for continuity errors. I'm resubmitting last week's entry since it includes more than 200 extra words. (The new total for both weeks is apparently 2000 words, but the words I deleted are still in last week's entry, so it's fine.)
  11. Week 54, and Group 4's arc has finally come to a conclusion. :')

    Rush of the Rainforest started playing shortly before I started writing. It feels like the perfect bookend to this truly emotional part of the story and my journey in writing this novel.

    Spoiler
    It roars in impotent fury! Unable to settle on a target, it writhes and then projects a wave of sludge from all its pores at once. Unfortunately for it, Mason is quick to respond and makes a powerful leap over it, spreading his arms wide and creating a net of energy in front of him. It siphons all the sludge towards it, which he gathers into a ball when he lands next to his two allies and hurls through the window to explode harmlessly inside.

    “What was that?” Credence asks in amazement.

    “It’s a trick for anyone or anything who thinks to attack multiple of us at once. And I have another trick in mind!” He slugs the wall, sending cracks spreading through it, and rips out a huge chunk of brick-and-mortar. Hefting it above him, he assumes a throwing position. “Give it the best kick you’ve got!”

    Gasping in understanding, Credence beams and bounces in excitement. Lotus gives him a decisive nod and a pat on the back. He nods back, jogs on the spot, and then performs a dramatic somersault that seems to suspend him in the air as he does flip after flip. He almost floats forwards, finally lashing out with a perfectly timed kick and launching himself through the air, away from Mason. Mason puts his all his power into the toss, catapulting the burning block towards the Kuribabylon.

    And like the fabled city of Babylon itself, the purple bag becomes a thing of history! It bursts like a giant boil and sprays its foul acid all across the road. Sky and Ember both produce psychic walls to protect themselves, and Lotus dances behind Mason and crouches down for cover. Mason is splattered completely, but he doesn’t mind in the slightest: he bursts into hearty laughter and doubles over in joy.

    Credence is spared most of the splattering, also standing behind Mason as he is, but he was too awed by the finishing blow after sticking his landing to react in time. He’s at least able to shield his face, but that leaves his arm to be covered in the acid instead.

    “That was totally sick, y’all!” he exclaims, unable to contain his excitement. The acid starts properly burning his arm, intensifying over time, thus prompting him to add, “Umm, but this also really hurts. Can—? Ow, fuck! Can somebody help, argh?!” He shakes his arm, trying to dislodge the purple gunk without getting more of it onto him or Lotus nearby.

    Sky teleports closer, ensuring to pick a spot not covered in any of the acid or slime, and produces a large orb of shimmering water. They levitate the orb towards Credence, engulfing his arm and dissolving the acid.

    He continues cringing in pain for a moment as the burning subsides into stinging, but when it fades away completely, he relaxes and laughs nervously. “Thanks, Sky.”

    “You’re welcome,” they say with quiet warmth.

    Lotus is following Sky’s example by trying to use Life Dew to dissolve the acid and heal Mason at the same time, but Mason is still laughing, complicating the process. He inhales the water when she reaches his face, which sends him into a sputtering fit. He breathes deeply after clearing his lungs and nods at Lotus. With his mouth closed, she can wipe away last of the acid, which she does with an amused smile.

    “Good job, everyone,” Ember says, his eyes on the splattered road as he carefully approaches. “We killed the boss.”

    “That was one of the coolest things I’ve ever seen!” Credence says.

    “It was one of the funniest things I’ve ever seen,” Mason replies, grinning widely.

    “Why?” Credence asks, frowning. “It was more gross than funny.”

    “It was gross!” Mason agrees. “Everything about these monsters has been ridiculous.” He then gestures at the purple mess beneath the chunk of rock. “This one’s death included. Have you ever held a water balloon and squeezed it too tightly?”

    “Umm,” Credence says in a staccato manner. “Water balloons are meant for throwing? How did you squeeze it too tightly?”

    “Too much excitement?” Mason guesses, shrugging good-naturedly. “Each of us was trying to prevent our water balloon from being popped by the others. I succeeded in keeping mine out of reach, but then I popped it myself.”

    Sky chuckles. “I can see how that would happen.”

    Mason nods enthusiastically. “Exactly! Maybe that would have been a better question to ask: if you’ve ever popped a water balloon that someone else was holding.”

    “I’m not a fan of water sports anyway,” Ember says under his breath, looking away from the squashed Kuribabylon. To his surprise, Mason reaches over and gives his shoulder a hefty pat, making the cat boy stumble a little.

    “It’s good fun, but everyone has their tastes,” Mason says. “I don’t play any card games; you obviously do.”

    “Well, what do we do now?” Credence asks with his eyes closed, taking great pleasure in stretching his legs while leaning back before moving to stretching his arms and shoulders.

    “Warming down is a very good idea,” the other man says. He begins stretching as well, though he takes more complex positions on account of his extra arms.

    Credence opens his eyes at the words and tries not to enjoy the surprising sight too much. He averts his gaze ever so slightly so he’s not looking directly at Mason.

    “Not a fan of stretching, either,” Ember mutters.

    “We still need to find the square, don’t we?” Sky ventures. “We could see if we can find the Floaters and ask them for directions.”

    “We were fighting these things for a while,” Credence points out. “They’re probably long gone by now. I know I wouldn’t have stuck around if I were them.” As another thought occurs, he voices it. “Oh, none of them exploded on us!”

    “Maybe that only happens if they can’t do anything else?” Mason suggests. “We didn’t restrain any of them, so they probably had no reason to explode.”

    “They can recover health,” Ember adds, “so it’s a last resort tactic.”

    “Which way should we go?” Sky asks, hoping to bring the group’s attention back to the original question.

    Mason stops stretching to look fondly at his companions. “We can go wherever we want. We’ve proven that we can and will support Credence and each other to ensure nothing bad happens to any of us.”

    “You’re not going to ask for a group hug, right?” Ember asks anxiously, remembering the embrace that Mason and Credence shared earlier when Credence first freaked out about the exploding monsters.

    “I wasn’t,” Mason says, smiling wickedly.

    Ember’s eyes widen, but just as he takes a step back, Credence zips around behind him and stops him from making any further progress. Mason then quickly sweeps Ember up and gently holds him with his two left arms. The teenager squirms and struggles, but to no avail.

    Neither Sky nor Lotus require any invitation. It’s awkward at first, but after a few seconds, everyone finds a position that’s at least partially comfortable. Ember doesn’t specifically hug anyone back, but he huffs and pushes his head forwards, at least somehow making voluntary contact with the others. He doesn’t meet anyone’s gaze and he’ll deny it if anyone asks, but he maybe likes it just a tiny bit.

    Lotus shares a knowing look with Sky and they both giggle quietly.

    A trial completed? Even if not, feelings bloom: trust and affection.

    ***


    It's 1244 words, since I decided to finish the arc rather than leave a hundred or so words for next week before needing to start the next bit anyway. I have a lot if recordkeeping to do now, especially in terms of writing down verbal tics and tracking the participants' virtue and prowess, so I'll probably let Giratina ramble about some topic before I move on to the final phase of the group stage.
  12. Week 55, woohoo! I've started tallying the combat results for Group 1, since I'm obviously not going to do that and then not write about it, bah! XD

    Spoiler
    “All four groups have united and emerged victorious from their combats,” Serene announces to the audience. He nods to himself and looks over to Giratina, who is curled up like a millipede.

    “Summarise them,” Giratina says, unmoving aside from gently floating in place.

    “I require clarification, Our Grace.”

    “The combats.”

    “Ah, I see. Thank you, Our Grace.” He turns towards the audience. “As you ha—” Serene abruptly stops speaking and closes his mouth. He visibly contemplates how to proceed before starting again. “Which fraction of the disembodied audience managed to spectate, at the same time, all four groups of participants forming and then engaging in combat?”

    “There was a solo stage,” Giratina adds.

    “Of course, Our Grace,” Serene says, nodding at the correction. “I ought to have chosen my words more carefully still. Thank you.”

    The distinction, as important as it may be, doesn’t actually change the outcome. Only a few voices indicate having followed everything at once, but they admit they couldn’t observe every detail; in fact, they missed quite a lot but got the general overview of each individual’s and group’s performance.

    “Which fraction,” Serene continues, “spectated every participant and group individually? The order is not currently important.”

    The vast majority of the audience indicates this option in some manner. There is a resounding chorus of neutral words of affirmation, but some eagerly call out or reply more mutely.

    “Understood. I presume the remainder of the audience followed more than one individual or group at a time and then either missed some details or otherwise spectated in sequence.”

    A sizeable minority of the audience agrees to this, several of the voices describing exactly what they did. As before, they state their familiarity with the general outcome of all battles, but even for the battles they did personally watch, it’s easy to confuse the results of any given battle with those of another. A summary of who scored how many points would be greatly useful!

    Serene shakes his head. “I am willing and able to provide a tally of the total casualties, as well as specifying the party responsible and any parties that assisted them, but it is not yet time to reveal the actual Prowess of the participants. That, naturally, will be done once Round One has concluded in its totality.”

    That works too! No member of the audience who kept score has such a tally for every participant. It’s not surprising that Serene, however, does! (He nods in appreciation of the complimentary observation.)

    Serene folds his arms behind his back. “The first group consists of Coil, Dare, Sapphire, Dagger, and Felicity. Coil was elected leader with a four-to-one majority. Interestingly, he is not only the sole Defender in the group, but also the sole non-Suppresser, as all four Suppressers in the tournament are with him. Neither he nor Sapphire engaged with the green swallowers that entered their alleys; additionally, Coil was unable to prevent the death of the son of the mayor that shared his alley. Dare, Dagger, and Felicity all successfully dispatched the green swallowers they encountered, thus preventing the deaths of the mayor’s sons that shared their alleys.

    “During their major confrontation, the group faced seven green swallowers and one purple swallower, just as the three other groups did. One Homer was already killed by the time they arrived on the scene, but this would not affect their performance evaluation. Coil slew two green swallowers, and though Sapphire was present for both engagements, her assistance is counted only for one. They share the credit for saving an endangered Homer. Dare slew three green swallowers — the first one was slain without the input of any of their fellow group members, whereas the following two included Dagger’s involvement, though similarly as with Sapphire, Dagger’s assistance is counted for only one of these two. Dagger slew the very first and very last of the seven green swallowers entirely on his own, and he also claims sole credit for rescuing two different Homers.

    “The entire group engaged in the battle against the purple swallower, as expected, and as such, all five participants are considered to have contributed significantly. Dagger delivered the finishing blow, however, and therefore receives the recognition for having slain the purple swallower.”

    That is a very useful summary! The audience members who are more inclined towards the enjoyment of electronic entertainment start tallying the total kills and assists for each of the five participants. Realising that he neglected to do that himself, the corner of Serene’s mouth momentarily pulls up in dissatisfaction.

    “I apologise for my oversight. The outcome across the solo stages and the group stage thus far is as follows: Coil abstained from one conflict, defeated two minor monsters, assisted in the defeat of one major monster, failed to prevent one civilian casualty, and rescued one civilian. Dare defeated four minor monsters, assisted in the defeat of one major monster, and rescued one civilian. Sapphire abstained from one conflict, assisted in the defeat of one minor and one major monster, and rescued one civilian. Dagger defeated three minor monsters and one major monster, assisted in the defeat of one minor monster, and rescued three civilians. Felicity defeated one minor monster, assisted in the defeat of one major monster, and rescued one civilian.”

    The audience enthusiastically thanks Serene! His initial summary was already very useful, but the conclusion absolutely helps to clarify how well each of the five participants performed. It’s immediately clear that Dagger is the best combatant in the group, not just because he’s tied with Dare for the greatest number of kills, but also because he has the greatest number of rescues. Some other voices argue no, the rescues don’t count towards his Prowess and would count towards his Virtue instead, especially since he was always very quick to try and save them. The first set of voices concedes the point, so they then rephrase their claim by pointing out how efficiently Dagger also generally was in dispatching the monsters. Nobody argues against that.


    It's 1003 words! Scraping it super closely, yeah, but I don't want to start a whole new paragraph just to make the gap a bit bigger. I can probably get away with just tallying results next week too, which is great, since I'd like to tally the Prowess and Virtue in my Excel spreadsheet for the tournament progress before I have to continue with the story proper.

    That's more than eighty thousand words that I have to flight-read. And knowing me (which the rereading today already proved), I'll probably be unable to resist editing something if it catches my eyes. DX
  13. Week 56. I shan't lie, this one dragged on, ugh. I wasn't anywhere near as productive as I'd have liked to be.

    Spoiler
    “The second group,” Serene continues, “consists of Edge, Erudite, Flit, Tiara, and Gold. Rather than having elected and deferring to a leader, they discuss matters amongst themselves before reaching a consensus. Nevertheless, Gold often takes the initiative, and Erudite often provides counsel to the other participants. The composition of the group is balanced in terms of roles, as there are two Attackers, a Defender, an Eroder, and a Blocker. Edge and Gold killed the green swallowers in their alleys, whereas Erudite non-violently subdued the one in hers. Flit fled from his designated green swallower and was chased by it towards Tiara, who then killed both hers and his.

    “When the group arrived on the scene of their major confrontation, they found three groups of Homers in danger, totalling twelve, though none of the Homers had been harmed yet. Two green swallowers created roadblocks along the one street, the purple swallower barred the way down the perpendicular street, and the remaining green swallowers chased the Homers around. Erudite inadvertently slew one green swallower while Tiara slew two, although Erudite assisted with the first of those two. Both participants actively protected one of the groups of Homers from harm and ensured their escape down an alley. The two other groups escaped as well, but without any particular protection from any of the five participants. Flit slew no green swallowers and largely focused on distracting the purple swallower, as well as on protecting his allies. Edge slew three green swallowers, one of whom had first been attacked by Gold. Gold slew one on his own.

    “The purple swallower’s attention was held by Flit for the majority of the time, as mentioned, but all five participants engaged in combat against it. Once again, that means all five participants are considered to have contributed significantly. Gold incinerated the purple swallower by having his power enhanced by Flit, so while he receives official recognition for slaying it, Flit is awarded equal credit despite not having actively injured the purple swallower himself.”

    Oh, that’s interesting! Several members of the audience cheer on Flit’s behalf, because even though it’s true that he wasn’t of any use in the offensive side of the battle, he’s a Blocker! That was literally not his role to play. Many of the disembodied audience members murmur approvingly amongst themselves; for those who would have liked to pick a supporting class if they had been participants, they would hope to fulfil the role as successfully as Flit, and for those who would have focused on attacking, they would hope to have as helpful an ally. That said, the latter part of the audience would also hope to make kills as spectacularly as Gold had! (Out of fairness, many of the other members also praise the three other participants’ efforts.)

    Serene waits until the audience’s enthusiastic discussion mostly dies down before he resumes. “I shall once again state the final outcome for the second group across the solo and group stages. Edge defeated four minor monsters, assisted with the defeat of one major monster, and rescued one civilian. Erudite subdued one minor monster, defeated one minor monster, assisted with the defeat of one minor and one major monster, and rescued five civilians. Flit assisted with the defeat of one minor monster, jointly defeated one major monster, and saved one ally. Tiara defeated four minor monsters, assisted with the defeat of one major monster, saved two allies, and rescued four civilians. Gold defeated two minor monsters, assisted with the defeat of one minor monster, jointly defeated one major monster, saved two allies, and rescued one civilian.”

    Hmm, some members of the disembodied audience note that there seems to be somewhat of a disadvantage to keeping the purple swallower occupied, as the other members of the two groups have had more time to deal with the green swallowers in the meantime, which arguably (likely?) increases their Prowess more than just participating in the defeat of the boss monster, since everyone was probably going to do that anyway. But it’s appropriate that Flit shares the credit for taking out the second purple swallower! Gold, like Dagger, was very impressive in his combat so far, but the majority of the voices agree that Gold and Tiara are actually tied in terms of displaying their Prowess, since Tiara did so much more than Gold in the same amount of time. Also like Dagger, she has the most rescues between her and Gold, though Erudite apparently has the most rescues overall.

    Well, that means Dagger and Tiara are probably in the lead when it comes to actual combat, with Dare and Gold being close behind them! Most of the other participants have been pulling their weight fairly well — a few voices unafraid of controversial opinions say that’s less the case for Sapphire and Felicity, as they feel these two participants generally underperformed. While that sparks an argument among several members, a reasonable number of voices pipe up that Edge was ignored in the previous evaluation between Gold and Tiara! True, he hadn’t done quite as much as the other two, but he still did better than most of the other participants from either of the two groups, and that despite being a young teenager! The voices not involved in the aforementioned argument admit that’s a good point. Five participants are in the lead for Prowess, then!

    It would be interesting to see what the Virtue scores look like for each participant. One nerdy-sounding voice is very quick to remind the others that this particular score will not be revealed under any circumstances (and is met with a chorus of voices shouting that they know), adding that the scores for Prowess won’t be revealed soon either. Many groans and statements of eyes being rolled follow, as the sentiment was that it would be interesting to know the scores, not that there was an actual expectation. It’s not just about the number of civilians rescued or allies saved, after all! What exactly it is about isn’t entirely clear, but that’s entirely the point.


    It's 1010 words and only eight large paragraphs — the power of explanations and commentaries! I normally have to write enough text to span three pages (not full pages, though), but the size of the paragraphs meant I actually fit everything into just one and a half. I find that amusing. XD
  14. Week 57~

    Spoiler
    Serene gives nothing away while the discussion ensues — not that his serene countenance has revealed much emotion at any point since Our Grace first appeared and announced itself to the disembodied audience. And yet, upon hearing some of the conclusions being made, he first gives a small, momentary smile of amusement at the pun, and thereafter, a sniff of dismissal, not quite disdainful but certainly somewhat reproachful, at the claim that he doesn’t show emotion. The astute members of the disembodied audience point out and explain this to the less astute and less… socially adept members. And indeed, many voices start listing examples of where Serene had showed emotion before. Just because he’s composed doesn’t mean he’s stoic! The general topic then shifts to the degree to which Serene expresses and even feels his emotions, which he evidently considers to be inappropriate to the current moment, as he resumes his summary. (The audience immediately falls silent to let him continue.)

    “The third group consists of Iridescent, Level, Rook, Amber, and Twist. The composition is nearly identical to that of the group before it, as there are two Attackers, a Defender, and an Eroder; the sole difference is the presence of a Controller instead of a Blocker. Another similarity is that the group relies on consensus to make decisions, though this is strained at times due to many differences in opinion and their approach to solving problems. Iridescent accidentally dispatched the green swallower in her alley, whereas Rook and Twist merely injured their green swallowers to the point of being unable to do further harm. Amber hid from and successfully avoided the green swallower passing through her alley. Level spiritually adopted her blue swallower, having encountered a rare variant of the green swallower, as well as one of the mayor’s daughters, whom Rook later named Lilady. While none of the other members of the group took issue with the girl joining them, more than one expressed concern towards the blue swallower. Level insisted on both individuals being welcome, to which everyone else agreed, even if to varying extents.

    “The major confrontation included the same number and types of swallowers as before. Three Homers and eight of the mayor’s sons were in danger, with three of the boys being unconscious by the time the participants arrived on the scene. Amber was first and jointly slew the first of the seven green swallowers with Rook, as they both injured it and Rook’s final action against it triggered the side-effect of Amber’s attack. Twist subdued a green swallower with the help of two of the boys, but Level was the one to slay it later during the encounter. Twist and Level both assisted greatly in the defeat of two more swallowers each, with Amber slaying the former’s pair and Iridescent slaying the pair of the latter. Amber also slew one green swallower entirely on her own.

    “The purple swallower focused its attacks on one of the Homers, who proved decently capable of defending themselves. Together with some of the green swallowers, it defeated another of the mayor’s sons; Rook carried two of the boys to safety and Level did the same for the other two. Unlike the previous two groups, not all members of this particularly group assisted in the battle against the purple swallower, who fought entirely against Rook. It attempted to recruit and then attack the blue swallower that had followed Level, but the latter resisted both attempts. As a result, the purple swallower twice employed a powerful technique to summon a different, random technique. The first of these instances summoned a blizzard, which required Amber to rescue Lilady. The second summoned a minor meteor shower, which required the same of Amber, and which also forced Level to rescue not only the four unconscious mayor’s sons, but also Iridescent and Twist. Rook then immobilised and distracted the purple swallower a final time, which allowed Amber, Iridescent, and Level to jointly slay it.”

    All three purple swallowers had made for dramatic boss fights, but it had definitely been interesting to see how each fight became more dramatic than the last! The first purple swallower had fought all five of Coil, Sapphire, Dare, Felicity, and Dagger at once, with Dagger and Coil then using a team combo to kill it. The second battle showed the green swallowers being particularly dangerous with all their rolling around, and the purple swallower actually demolished a building before being incinerated alongside yet another building. (One of the voices points out, rather annoyed, that three buildings had been melted alongside the swallower and that the narration had been particularly clear about that. The voices responsible for the error apologise for their oversight.) And yet the final of the three purple swallowers so far had legally cheated to summon way more powerful moves than it was allowed to use! Its death had been less spectacular than the previous one’s — though still objectively spectacular and very satisfying to watch — but it had posed a far greater threat. The difference was especially noticeable to those members of the audience who had watched all four groups simultaneously.

    “These observations are valid,” Serene notes, “but they are ultimately coincidental, rather than intentional. All green swallowers and purple swallowers possess the same techniques, but how they—”

    “Don’t pull back the curtain, Serene,” Giratina mumbles sleepily. “Think of their sanity.”

    Serene looks pained. He slowly inhales deeply before speaking. “I am ashamed of the degree to which I may succumb to my desire for accuracy and understanding. I sincerely apologise, Our Grace, and I beg your forgiveness.”

    “You don’t need to beg for it,” Giratina says quietly and cheekily, “and you anyway know that wouldn’t work.”

    “Then I continue to disappoint myself with my poor choice of words, Our Grace. Thank you for your kindness.”

    “You flatter me! Resume the summary; the audience is practically salivating.”

    Those members of the disembodied audience who weren’t salivating ensure that they are doing so after Our Grace’s comment. They could listen to Serene and his smooth baritone all day long! And more than just a day! (For forever, really.)


    I was supposed to finish Group 3's summary, but when I checked my word count after finishing the little exchange between Giratina and Serene, I noticed I was actually over a thousand words already. So, oh well! I'll finish it next week. XD

    That said, it's 1021 words plus 25 from correcting a continuity error earlier in the novel, for a total of 1046 words. B)
  15. It's Week 58! I'm pretty late this week because my D&D one-shot with Ventomology and TheSilverFox continued longer than anticipated (totally worth it, though!) and because I wanted to watch a bit of the riveting Rugby World Cup game between South Africa and France (we won, so also totally worth it!).

    Spoiler
    Serene bows at the compliment. “I appreciate the audience’s attention. That said, Iridescent defeated three minor monsters, jointly defeated one major monster, and rescued one civilian. Level defeated one minor monster, jointly defeated one major monster, assisted in the defeat of two minor monsters, rescued five civilians, and saved two allies. Rook subdued one minor monster, jointly defeated one minor monster, assisted with the defeat of one major monster, and rescued four civilians. Amber evaded one minor monster, defeated three minor monsters, jointly defeated one minor and one major monster, and rescued one civilian. Twist subdued one minor monster and assisted in the defeat of three minor monsters.”

    It seems like it’s more difficult to identify a clear best combatant for these five participants than it was for the two previous groups. Nothing shows that better than the three-way credit for taking out the purple swallower! Level rescued many civilians and two of her allies, but she definitely showed her capacity for dealing out damage with those arm cannons of hers. Amber and, more surprisingly, Iridescent are tied for killing the most minor monsters, which puts them on par with Dagger. A few disembodied voices note that Iridescent’s only attack seems particularly effective against the swallowers, so her performance might be more due to pure power than to skill in battle. Or maybe even something else entirely! But at the same time, Amber also focused on firing projectiles at the swallowers from afar, so if they didn’t do much differently, is it fair to praise or criticise one more than the other?

    Ultimately, the audience reaches the consensus that all three ladies performed well, but none quite as spectacularly as some of the participants from the previous groups. Gold and Level are probably equal in terms of raw firepower, so their prowess should be more or less equal too. Dare, Dagger, Edge, and Tiara all have exactly four kills and one assist to their names, so they’re probably the four best performers so far. Iridescent technically has four and no assists, while Amber has five and no assists, but because of their joint defeat of the purple swallower, it counts for less than with the others. Amber would stand ever so slightly above Iridescent, also because she evaded one of the green swallowers and simply chose not to fight it, so she could join the four contenders and make it a top five. And what a top five!

    “We have now reached the fourth, and thus final, group,” Serene announces once it seems like the audience’s excitement has mostly been spent. “It consists of Ember, Lotus, Mason, Credence, and Sky. As all the other participants have already appeared in a group, it also means the remainder of the roles are all present, including one Attacker, two Defenders, one Blocker, and one Controller. Interestingly, three main patterns can be identified in the composition of the different groups: all groups include at least one Defender; all groups save the first contain at least one Attacker; and the Blocker, Eroder, and Controller roles are distributed among the last three groups in a manner that ensures two of the three are present, but never in the same combination.”

    Wow! Whether Our Grace determined the order randomly or whether it chose a specific arrangement of individuals or roles to create the groups, it ended up being as close to perfect as possible! (Some voices immediately point out that Our Grace said the order was random, but other voices are just as quick to point out that Our Grace said the order was random. Numerous voices are confused and believe the same thing was just said twice, which they express. Neither of the two other groups bothers to explain the difference and simply debates whether divine mandate extends to the nature of randomness.)

    “The final group,” Serene says emphatically, promptly ending the debate, “also relied on consensus for decision making, yet it simultaneously took the official stance of supporting Credence, making him the figurehead.” (One voice quickly uses the opportunity to slip in the suggestion that Credence is the fourth group’s mascot. The joke receives mixed reactions.) “All five members actively dealt with the green swallowers entering their alleys, but all did so differently. Ember unknowingly dispatched the green swallower, Credence knowingly dispatched it, and Sky indirectly dispatched it by causing it to bring about its own demise. Mason subdued his without dispatching it, and Lotus simply evaded hers. However, that final green swallower returned later and was dispatched by Mason and Credence.

    “Nine Homers were endangered by the eight swallowers. Two died prior to the group’s arrival for the major confrontation, two escaped of their own accord, and five remained behind on the scene, of which three attacked the swallowers. Lotus rescued two of those, and Mason convinced the leader of the Homer group to flee to safety with the four others. Mason and Credence initially spent the majority of their time attacking the green swallowers, and though they seriously damaged all of them, none were slain in earnest. All the swallowers then recuperated their stamina and vitality, effectively restarting the confrontation. Ember was the first to slay a green swallower, and he slew a second one with Credence’s assistance sometime later. Mason slew three green swallowers, also with Credence’s assistance for two of those. Credence himself slew two, with Sky having assisted for one of them.

    “The purple swallower was largely occupied by Mason both before and after the restart. When all the green swallowers had been slain, the entire group engaged it in combat, with Lotus and Ember taking supporting roles. As such, all members of the group are considered to have contributed significantly. Credence and Mason slew it at the end of the confrontation, but Lotus shares in the credit for the same reason Flit did before, which is the empowerment of the final attack.


    Okay, so the above spoiler contains only 983 words, which means I would be under the limit — except I added the following sentence to the part where Ember asks Credence if he's played Dungeons and Dragons before, since I've since realised there was a continuity error by Credence saying he doesn't play computer games yet knows of Minecraft: "He hadn’t often played video games, and when he had, it was when his friends convinced him to play something like Minecraft or Among Us with them." So, with those extra 27 words, I'm at 1010! Hah. B)


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