To make this not entirely pointless, can you review this for me? topic72983.html Yeah, it's another novel I'm starting/restarting... But hey, don't judge me. I have issues.
Alrighty guys. Skins and Persephoneia: your reviews are done! Leebass: Since you told me to forget about it, I haven't done it yet... but I plan to! As soon as I can.
If others need reviews, just tell me! Unfortunately, I may be a few days getting back to you until finals are over, but after this week I'm certainly open.
Ok, I'm on winter break now, folks, so if you need something to be ripped up, say so here!
(Just so you know: if this thread dies, Skins will attack each and every one of you in your sleep--which should scare you because she's got a spatula, and she's not afraid to use it! Like, a big scary rubber one.)
Your review for The Last Day was awesome, so here I am to ask for another. Can you please review the Prologue of my novel? It's a revised version of the original, so I need some feedback. Thanks in advance!
Tiger
"A superman ... is, on account of certain superior qualities inherent in him, exempted from the ordinary laws which govern men. He is not liable for anything he may do." Nathan Leopold
So, I know it is Christmas Eve. (Merry Christmas, by the way!) Please feel free to take weeks on this. Months. Years. Lifetimes. But, once you have the time, and are yearning to review something, could you please take a look at this?
Been working on it for a while it is the intro and first part of the first chapter (the whole of the first chapter will be like over 20 pages long so I'm just putting here the first part ) It is called Fear and it's General fiction and for now it's rated 12 + for language, though the following chapters will be from 12+ to 16+ to 18+ .
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