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Tue Nov 06, 2012 3:59 pm
Sourdude16 says...



Got a novel or a short story that needs reading? Look no further. Ill review your work and will continue to read any additions to novels that are placed. If you have a new work to something I've already read of yours, just alert me through a message or this forum.
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Wed Nov 07, 2012 12:49 pm
ShakespeareWallah says...



I have short-story. CAn you please review that. Here's the link,

work.php?id=97866
  





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Wed Nov 07, 2012 4:36 pm
Sourdude16 says...



got it, will read first thing when i get home. Keep writing.
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Thu Nov 08, 2012 8:21 pm
WaitingForLife says...



Heya!

Got a 2-part short story (about 4000 words) I'd appreciate some feedback on. Contains minor cursing - just a heads up if that sort of thing doesn't sit well with you. Thanks. :)

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=97860
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Thu Nov 08, 2012 8:29 pm
Sourdude16 says...



no prob. Reading now.
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Sun Dec 02, 2012 5:27 pm
Clarity says...



work.php?id=98150 this is my first short ever... it's first draft and isn't finished :)
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Tue Dec 11, 2012 6:25 pm
Sourdude16 says...



Alright, reviewed. Keep writing folks.
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Fri Dec 14, 2012 4:43 am
Lycando says...



Could you review this for me?

work.php?id=98294

It's the second part of a short story but there's a link to the first part. If you could review both it would be awesome, thanks!
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Fri Dec 14, 2012 4:15 pm
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Sure, no prob. Both being reviewed right now.
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Sun Dec 16, 2012 5:16 am
Lycando says...



Hi there again! This is the third part of my story

work.php?id=98304

Thanks! :)
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Sun Dec 16, 2012 4:05 pm
klara1882 says...



Hey there!
I have two short-stories (one being a lot shorter than the other) that need a review. I'd appreciate as much criticism as possible.

Leaking Words - work.php?id=98004

Soon - work.php?id=98301

Thank you :)
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